when playing sixteen it’s not a real game yet. they laugh hard when she tries to lie. supernatural. ruby. dean. sam. (sam/ruby, dean/ruby, sam/dean) malleus maleficarum. 1070 words, pg13.
She stays behind with the dust in some city, cocks her head up to the sky, and smells it. It’s coming fast, it’s coming soon, and she thinks she’s remembering what it’s like to be afraid.
this is gorgeous. wow, just incredible, I love the imagery you use, and the characterization, and that last line. wow. I love this a lot.
I really enjoyed this. I loved how you create such a dark atmosphere and the imagery is fantastic. I liked how you described Ruby's relationship with the boys, how she follows and watches and just stays, yet trying to figure things out at the same time. Wonderful.
Good job on taking the "hunt" from Dean and Sam and making Ruby the hunter as she follows the brothers around from city to city. I really like that idea.
And that last line? Yeah, pretty much summed up the entire fic, in my opinion :)
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this is gorgeous. wow, just incredible, I love the imagery you use, and the characterization, and that last line. wow. I love this a lot.
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And that last line? Yeah, pretty much summed up the entire fic, in my opinion :)
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it, love.
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