Supernatural Fic: when playing sixteen

Feb 18, 2008 21:42

when playing sixteen
it’s not a real game yet. they laugh hard when she tries to lie. supernatural. ruby. dean. sam. (sam/ruby, dean/ruby, sam/dean) malleus maleficarum. 1070 words, pg13.

for ephemerall. for being patient. ♥

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show: spn, character: ruby, pairing: dean/ruby, pairing: sam/ruby

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torigates February 19 2008, 04:28:07 UTC
She stays behind with the dust in some city, cocks her head up to the sky, and smells it. It’s coming fast, it’s coming soon, and she thinks she’s remembering what it’s like to be afraid.

this is gorgeous. wow, just incredible, I love the imagery you use, and the characterization, and that last line. wow. I love this a lot.

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fated_addiction February 20 2008, 01:09:30 UTC
Thank you so much!

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rogueslayer452 February 19 2008, 11:03:32 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I loved how you create such a dark atmosphere and the imagery is fantastic. I liked how you described Ruby's relationship with the boys, how she follows and watches and just stays, yet trying to figure things out at the same time. Wonderful.

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fated_addiction February 20 2008, 01:10:14 UTC
I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.

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quiet_rebel February 19 2008, 18:46:31 UTC
Good job on taking the "hunt" from Dean and Sam and making Ruby the hunter as she follows the brothers around from city to city. I really like that idea.

And that last line? Yeah, pretty much summed up the entire fic, in my opinion :)

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fated_addiction February 20 2008, 01:15:39 UTC
*grins* Thank you for reading.

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oxoniensis February 19 2008, 23:48:05 UTC
I love what you do with Ruby, this.

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fated_addiction February 20 2008, 01:16:04 UTC


I'm so glad you enjoyed it, love.

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ephemerall February 21 2008, 00:11:09 UTC
this is gorgeous. ♥

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