[Fic] Companionship

Nov 15, 2010 10:05

Rating: T, for foul language.
Summary: He finds camaraderie in an antique shop, of all places.  [AU, gen-- though there's quite a blink-and-you'll-miss-it Ryoma/Sakuno implication]
Warning/s: ANGST. Because I've never actually pictured Ryoma wearing ANGST like a suit, you know, I mean, this is Ryoma we're talking about. So yeah, possible OOC-ness, ( Read more... )

!comm: iu_fanfiction, !pairing: gen, !fandom: prince of tennis

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neko11lover November 15 2010, 09:11:43 UTC
HELLO, MILES, WHY AREN'T YOU A PRO YET.

Now BRB as I reread this and comment something better, because I am still reeling from that initial feeling of finishing something amazing. /I HAD GOOSEBUMPS

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neko11lover November 15 2010, 09:16:48 UTC
WHAT Second reading and I was still left breathless. I loved the way you paced it - things were happening, kind of like how it feels in the middle of a busy street and you're standing in the middle seeing everything. I loved your use of words - elegant, consistent and you made the characters really moved.

Just one thing, though! I actually appreciated this as an original story and not fanfiction, because Ryoma seems like an entirely different person (I was imagining another man, tbqh) but you got Sakuno well.

Anyway, Miles, god knows how much I love your writing style.

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neko11lover November 15 2010, 09:39:53 UTC
*REALLY MOVE

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inkstainedblade November 15 2010, 09:26:28 UTC
Shit.

I can't think straight.

God Miles...I don't know why but I can't form a coherent review right now.

This is fantastic...I couldn't say anything more, really.

...

I still can't think straight.

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