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I'll stop running for you...Part 2/3

Jan 06, 2012 05:05

Title: I'll stop running for you...Part 2/3
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Spoilers: Impossible Astronaut/Night Terrors/The Doctor the Widow and the Wardrobe
Characters: Eleven/Jack, brief appearance of Amy and Rory
Word Count: 2,600
A/N: A sequal to this though can probably be read on its own. Set mostly after the events at Lake Silencio. ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

yersi_fanel January 5 2012, 23:29:35 UTC

Nuuuuuu

fate_incomplete January 6 2012, 11:26:55 UTC

Sorry,the final part will be a bit more hopeful. Something about these two makes happy endings seem unlikely.

yersi_fanel January 6 2012, 13:12:51 UTC

You're doing it great anyway :)

a_phoenixdragon January 6 2012, 07:16:34 UTC

OH my GODS...I just...OH MY GODS.

You...you mentioned him watching and...

Undertheconsolesex...Ilovethatsohard - and anger and hate and love -

Why am I bothering to write Blue?! You say it all so much better, with fewer words, a tighter plot and two heart-raw characters with such PERFECTION.

*Chokes on the beautiful emotion and sweet pain*

Thank you...thank you!! Ohh, I need more, love...please...

fate_incomplete January 6 2012, 11:39:52 UTC

So glad you liked it hun *hugs*

As soon as you mentioned about the possibility of Jack being there, I had to have him watching, it was too fitting, and deliciously angsty.

lol under the console on the console...So many rooms in the TARDIS so little time...oh wait, all of time and space...

I have the last part about two thirds done, will probably finish it on the weekend before I go back to work.

And you're writing Blue 'cause the world needs more psychological angsty porny things in it!!

a_phoenixdragon January 6 2012, 12:45:01 UTC

OMG I lovedit!!!

*Rolls in the delicious angst!!*

That was so perfect, so fitting, unngghhh!!

Console room sex though - especially angry sex - is the best, unnnggghhhh. Andandand...*THUD*

*DANCES!* YESSSSS!!!

Well...I guess it does. Besides, better not let some of my listy hear me say that. They seem strangely addicted to Blue - but then, so am I. And awesome tasty treats like this?! Only highlight the need for raw, hot angst and rumpled clothing. Unngghh. I await the final part with joy!! This was a gorgeous ending for the second part...ohh, the PAIN.

*Loves*

*Squishes you breathless*

kajmere January 9 2012, 07:35:34 UTC

Oh I am loving this verse so much! totally my head canon now ;)

Ugh, my heart is breaking for both of them so much!

fate_incomplete January 9 2012, 11:45:29 UTC

*hugs* thanks hun, I had so much fun doing this. Never knew how much I loved the idea of the two of them until I started writing this, now they are kind of stuck in my head...

kajmere January 10 2012, 05:01:03 UTC

I always loved the idea of Doctor/Jack. But it was often Ten/Jack that I read, only a couple TW fics where Eleven showed up in that verse, and I adored them together. But this, just... My heart swells <3

I do hope you end up writing more of them

fate_incomplete January 10 2012, 08:23:57 UTC

I loved Nine/Mortal!Jack so very much, and enjoy Ten/Jack though it is one sided, but the idea of Eleven and Jack intruges me greatly. The Doctor has changed in so many small ways this regeneration, and I like to think would be more accepting. Eleven knows what affect he has on those who travel with him now, and they could understand the loneliness they each feel. I think i will write more of them in the future, too much angst too resist...