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[fat_heidi]

a short poem i wrote today for enjoyment, if possible

Comments

[noin]

You enrich my friends page with your lovely writing. =)
The imagery is strong, the sentiment well-expressed. I enjoyed it very much. You should write more.

A minor note however: in the fourth line, is the word supposed to be "engulfs"? rather than "engulf"?

[fat_heidi]

you are very right. thanks so much for pointing that out!

[lauremnichelle]

are you gonna apply to awesome360 or what? :]

[fat_heidi]

i did, but there was a problem with my e-mail, and my entire entry was erased. i was a little *crushed*, but i'll try again. :)