Ficlet: Both Sides

Jun 15, 2010 09:55

Title: Both Sides
Paring: Jon/Neil
Rating: PG
Warnings: Fluff!
Notes: Takes place many years after Fast Fuse. I wrote most of this on the plane on the way home, a Fluff Tuesday ficlet for the_reverand <3

Come on, by my side )

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thickets June 15 2010, 14:43:16 UTC
Oh man, this is so incredibly sweet and lovely and wonderful. <3 I love the description of older Jon, and Neil's inner turmoil. And of course, sleepy reunion snuggles. :D

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eggnogged June 17 2010, 02:37:53 UTC
Aw, thanks. I'm glad you liked it! <3

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the_reverand June 15 2010, 15:05:21 UTC
I can't get over how lovely and gorgeous this is. You know I love the grey-bearded Jon bits, and others, but I didn't say what a perfect mix of sweet and sexy and just a bit hurty this bit is:

Neil tiptoes to the edge of the bed and slides under the covers as quietly as he can. Jon turns towards him like a flower to the sun, his arm snaking around Neil’s waist and his bristly face nuzzling against his neck, snuffling wetly against Neil’s sensitive skin. He’s so warm, like a furnace, all sleep heavy and comfortingly familiar. He’s not awake yet but he will be, soon, and it’ll be good - the hot intensity of his gaze, his murmured endearments, his searching hands, his hungry mouth. The sex they have when Neil comes home is always good, pretty amazing, in fact, but it doesn’t quite make up for all those weeks without it, without him. If you were to add them all up, all the assignments back to back, how long would it be? Three years? Five? It seems ludicrously long, and Neil isn’t sure he wants to do it anymore.

Thank you again!! <3

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eggnogged June 17 2010, 02:44:57 UTC
I'm so happy you liked it! <3

I kind of have a picture in my mind of the major events of their lives, and I had a lot more in there at first that was just exposition about what they've been up to that I ended up taking out because it was kind of unnecessary to say all of that in this one ficlet. I guess I'll just have to keep on writing in this verse... such a hardship! XD

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ftw302 June 15 2010, 15:49:39 UTC
the only thing that can encapsulate my thoughts on this is aaaaAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaAAaaawwwwwwWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwWWWwww it's so sweet and sorta sad and fluffy and awesome <3

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eggnogged June 17 2010, 02:46:10 UTC
Thank you! :D Sweet and sorta sad is a pretty apt description for them two, hahah.

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fifteenminutes June 15 2010, 16:06:15 UTC
Oh, this is perfect!
Their relationship is so lovely. They're able to make it work despite everything they went through at the start and the time spent apart throughout. And Neil's decision at the end made me all warm and fuzzy.
Wonderful ♥

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eggnogged June 17 2010, 02:49:09 UTC
Thanks, so pleased you liked! <3

I think their relationship will have had its ups and downs, but these days all I want to write is the fluffy parts. XD

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fifteenminutes June 17 2010, 04:48:20 UTC
I approve!
With all the angst I just want to see them snuggle and be cute together. It might not make for serious and important~ fic but whatever, I love fluff. xD

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xthursdaynextx June 15 2010, 20:24:12 UTC
Aaaw, sweet but also thoughtful. I liked it <3

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eggnogged June 17 2010, 02:50:06 UTC
Thank you! <3 My brain is firmly in fluff mode these days, hahah.

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