Fic: Wish You Were Here

[xthursdaynextx]

Title: Wish You Were Here
Pairing: Jon/Neil
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual references.
Disclaimer: This is fanfic for AU fanfic. I don't know who owns it but it's not me.
A/N: Set after Part 7 of Fast Fuse. Neil's side of the story. What Neil tells his parents about Jon.

Comments

[eggnogged]

As if somehow, talking about Jon now, here - as Neil, not Elliot - has made him more real.

Don't think I've said so before, but that line is perfection. <3 <3

Thanks for posting it here! Now I can put it in my memories. :D

[websurffer]

Would you mind if I theived some (all) of the dialogue from this to write the same scene from Neil's mom's POV? I'd be continuing it on to where she meets Jon, but since I'd mainly want to use your dialogue I wanted to double check that that was alright with you.

[xthursdaynextx]

It's ok to use it, I just wonder whether there are ways round repeating all of it, like less of the dialogue and more of her thoughts so it doesn't get boring for people reading the same thing twice.

[dustyejolene]

This was very necessary, I think. :P I've been dying to hear about Neil's side of things XD