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anonymous January 29 2012, 00:56:11 UTC
I was reading this too and really just couldn't get into it. I love the idea, but the execution was poor. In addition to the crusty dialogue, there was too much telling rather than showing-long blocks of exposition about the past or background information that was unnecessary or could have been presented in a more interesting way.

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