My very first Live Journal entry!!! This story didn't really fit in any of they Yahoo boards where I'm a member, so I decided to try this. Let me know what you think
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Sorry to be unclear! Not my first fic, just my first Live Journal posting. My other stuff is on Yahoo! JDFF. IF this format works for me, I'll repost my previous stories here as well. I'm glad you liked it.
I really enjoyed this, great work. I could 'see' the whole thing. You're right too, I've never read anything else from the Josh-finds-out perspective. Thanks for posting the link on TWoP.
Finally remembered to come read your fic, after the sweet comments you left on mine!
If it wasn't so late, I would be reading the others right now as well, but for now, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this piece and as a few have mentioned, how nice it was to see someone not only write the moment, but write it phenomenally well. To be honest, for a minute I thought you'd taken some of the dialogue from the show and written around it
God, I just.... I love your dialogue. So much. I can't even come up with anything better than "I love it", that's how much I love it. :)
I'm so glad you like it! I love to write for Toby because it's such a challenge to get it right, the cadence and the cynicism and the passion and the strange inarticulateness in such an articulate man. Thanks so much for taking time to comment.
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If it wasn't so late, I would be reading the others right now as well, but for now, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this piece and as a few have mentioned, how nice it was to see someone not only write the moment, but write it phenomenally well. To be honest, for a minute I thought you'd taken some of the dialogue from the show and written around it
God, I just.... I love your dialogue. So much. I can't even come up with anything better than "I love it", that's how much I love it. :)
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