Ohgod. Ohman. And things! With ohs. And much squeaking. Incoherently. I just - I - I swear, my hands are doing very expressive things right now that I'm not exactly certain how to articulate properly. My love, this is the most fantasmagorical thing in all of ever. It - Hypnos. Okay, wait, I have to read it again. For, like, the seventeenth time. Again.
I just - With Hera. And the flower. Oh. He's just so overwhelmed by himself and his own ability to jump in front of himself without asking first. Which is just so endearing. His jingly-jangly nerves and how he's ancient and sleepy and clueless all at once. And Thanatos. (Is it weird that I find your commas charming? Because they are. They're very charming commas.) And just how much he loves her. Suddenly and unexpectedly and completely and how she just forgets to say things. And how much he needs to hear them. And ohgosh. This is - SO GOOD.
I'm going to go roll around in this some more. And then I will jump you in sheer JOY
but you already know all the ridiculous things i said yesterday, yadda yadda. i've just come to say that MY COMMAS AREN'T CHARMING, they're obnoxious and salty and i was trying to write sentences without commas but i just don't know how, ahhhh.
And: Nonsense. They are excessively charming commas. (And I happen to like salt. And will probably die of high cholesterol. So there.) They work so well with the incomplete, skittery, fifteen-different-directions-at-once nature of the thought processes. So stop badmouthing your commas. I like them. We're BFFs.
Oh. Agreed. Same here. I think it's going to be a pleasant habit.
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Just laying that right out there first.
Ohgod. Ohman. And things! With ohs. And much squeaking. Incoherently. I just - I - I swear, my hands are doing very expressive things right now that I'm not exactly certain how to articulate properly. My love, this is the most fantasmagorical thing in all of ever. It - Hypnos. Okay, wait, I have to read it again. For, like, the seventeenth time. Again.
I just - With Hera. And the flower. Oh. He's just so overwhelmed by himself and his own ability to jump in front of himself without asking first. Which is just so endearing. His jingly-jangly nerves and how he's ancient and sleepy and clueless all at once. And Thanatos. (Is it weird that I find your commas charming? Because they are. They're very charming commas.) And just how much he loves her. Suddenly and unexpectedly and completely and how she just forgets to say things. And how much he needs to hear them. And ohgosh. This is - SO GOOD.
I'm going to go roll around in this some more. And then I will jump you in sheer JOY
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but you already know all the ridiculous things i said yesterday, yadda yadda. i've just come to say that MY COMMAS AREN'T CHARMING, they're obnoxious and salty and i was trying to write sentences without commas but i just don't know how, ahhhh.
i might make a habit of this, honestly.
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And: Nonsense. They are excessively charming commas. (And I happen to like salt. And will probably die of high cholesterol. So there.) They work so well with the incomplete, skittery, fifteen-different-directions-at-once nature of the thought processes. So stop badmouthing your commas. I like them. We're BFFs.
Oh. Agreed. Same here. I think it's going to be a pleasant habit.
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With optimal html abuse. Ohman, I so missed the html abuse.
(Now I have to run out and put hay down on the new grass seed before it's completely dark out. I shall return!)
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<3 I adore your face, and your commas. Jackie's right; they are charming. X'D
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NOT CHARMING. ): sprinkled too liberally. they're like glorified speedbumps that i don't even treat as speedbumps, oops.
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