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faorism

[Fiction] and off we go to nowhere good

Jun 23, 2010 05:35

Title: and off we go to nowhere good
Series: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Genre and Pairing: Romance. Dino/Hibari.
Words/Progress: 1500; Complete.
Notes: T. Non-AU. Ages are not listed, but I wrote it with the understanding that Hibari is 18. Iguana fluff. Written for khr_projects' d18 exchange (prompt: The dynamic between Dino and Hibari in a Mafia mission). ( Read more... )

shipping: misc, f.animanga: reborn, love: mentorhood, expression: fiction, love: slash

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faorism June 23 2010, 19:49:04 UTC

IGUANAS NEED MORE LOOOOOOOOOVE. YESSSSSSSSSSSSS. (Srsly, I am so happy I went for the iguana over the puppy/kitty/bunny. Iguanas are so much more lovable in a fic!)

FUZZ-ATTACK!

Yeah, they are not my main at all, but they are my token permanent&untouched mentor/student ship and deary me no one taking that from me!

mochalatt3 June 24 2010, 07:49:10 UTC

Loved this &hearts The characterization is so spot on and I love the way you wrote them together.

But... there is still something there that lies unbroken even in the chaos of tonfa claps against skin and whips biting the air. The silence... it rings in their ears. Deafening, wild action.

This is perfect because it's exactly how I would imagine Hibari in a fight- calm and deadly. You captured his essence brilliantly and the fact that Dino absorbed this quality in the fight feels natural. Dino is a lot like Yamamoto imo, a happy guy who knows when to go into fighting mode.

I remember a time when you really hated Hibari lol. Do you still feel that way? Anywayz, this fic was awesome, you're awesome, ILU.

faorism June 24 2010, 08:28:20 UTC

Pfffst lol. I wrote this in such a fury of words; I wasn't sure if what was up and down by the end of it! Idk. I think it's a LOT easier to have good characterization from Dino!POV since omgomg Hibari? HIBARI IS IMPOSSIBLE D:

I agree! That's actually my favorite line(s) from this. I hate writing fight scenes, so when I do I go for less-words-big-images. Glad it paid off.

LOL. He's actually my representative khr icon! (Isn't he adorable!) I kid you not: I saw that icon with Hibari and Hibird and I fell in love. It's just REALLLLLY convenient that Dino happened to work well with Hibari. Because I srsly don't have the urge to ship every character I love. SRSLY. I actually won't ever write a fiction for a character I despise (MY EYES ARE SET ON YOU MADARALATOBI!!!!) so you don't have to worry about that.