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faorism

[Fiction] Breathe

Dec 15, 2009 10:53

Breathe

Author: fallen-angel-of-repression
Series: Naruto
Pairing: Kakashi/Iruka
Genre: Romance
Word Count: 196
Progress: Complete.
Notes: M. Non-AU. Happy B-day, aviss! queershinobi100 ; 52_flavours (prompt- secret city of people)

Summary: Oh, glory. Life.

( So many people: they walk with security and whimsy... )

f.animanga: naruto, expression: fiction, love: slash, shipping: kakairu

Comments 6

aramiahatake December 15 2009, 22:46:27 UTC

Good writting. I love how you made it more real. We breath death. And as such we breathe life. That is all to true for them. Love it. Thanks for sharing.

faorism December 15 2009, 22:55:23 UTC

I am happy that the "real" came across! I wrote it for aviss, who is brilliant at portraying shinobi life as close to realistic as one can get in a fiction. I wanted to write something similar for happy b-day love.

animemetoo December 16 2009, 01:26:02 UTC

*sighs* I love this...it's all so real. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.

faorism December 16 2009, 02:49:43 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment! *hugs*

name_me_regret December 18 2009, 02:24:43 UTC

i loved this. it was so real, and heartwarming. good job

faorism December 18 2009, 04:14:36 UTC

Thank you for the sweet comment!