once you’ve got that beat, come and find me, for aprilclash

May 01, 2014 23:28

Title: once you’ve got that beat, come and find me
For: aprilclash
Word count: 2,276
Rating: G
Summary: Kris returns home to Guangzhou for the first time in ten years. Much has changed, including his Pack. wolf!au

Guangzhou is a homecoming. )

!round 2014

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taerissa May 2 2014, 10:01:13 UTC
aww i wish this could be longer!!

but i enjoyed it a lot nonetheless!

kris' face must have been priceless when he saw yixing huehuehue uwu

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ventice May 8 2014, 15:53:27 UTC
me too!! if i have time later on, i would like to come back to this and complete it :')

thank you for reading!

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aprilclash May 2 2014, 10:53:52 UTC
This is so perfect ;; It may be short but it's exactly what I wished to read with this prompt ;////;
I loved the pack interactions, and Kris' reaction when he met his mom.
And then Yixing was perfect, and the moment they met was fvjdckòlsxòsvk with Lu Han's whistling and everyone teasing, and mom being all satisfied.
Really, I'm sorry this was this short, but it's beautiful, not only the plot but I also love the way it's written!
Thank you for writing this ♥

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ventice May 8 2014, 15:55:42 UTC
ahhhhhh i'm glad you liked it and how it turned out :(((( i wish i could've done it more justice, but maybe in the future!!

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tyreling May 6 2014, 03:32:03 UTC
This was lovely. I love how you used the setting to tell the story, as if we're physically right there with Yifan. I was hoping it'd be longer :< but knowing the time constraint, I'll bother you some other time for sequels. >:D

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ventice May 8 2014, 15:55:55 UTC
i'm gonna sit on u :{

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suri711 May 29 2014, 08:38:03 UTC
oh god, this was beautifully written~ ahh, i wish there was more to read!!

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ventice June 18 2014, 03:32:07 UTC
thank you! i wish i had the time to write more :(

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