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Drabble - A Hole in the World

Aug 18, 2013 16:17

Reposting an old drabble

Title Hell’s Housekeepers
Author Bruttimabuoni
Rating PG
Word Count 100
Prompt 099 Desperate Housewives at still_grrr
Characters/Pairing (if any) Fred

( What came after… )

a515 a hole in the world, fic

Comments 7

thismaz August 18 2013, 15:32:55 UTC

Oh, grim efficiency.
Very nicely done.

brutti_ma_buoni August 18 2013, 16:34:59 UTC

Thanks! I always do like writing these sideways looks at the main characters and what they leave behind.

waddiwasiwitch August 18 2013, 18:55:54 UTC

Nice look at something we never see.

baudown August 18 2013, 19:16:37 UTC

Oh, Fred. Ouch.

velvetwhip August 18 2013, 19:57:05 UTC

Visceral in its portrayal of the mundane and very effective!

Gabrielle

clockwork_hart1 August 18 2013, 22:05:53 UTC

I think I just died a little. That was really gorgeously written, very visceral, very brutal. Damn, I need tissue, stat.