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Fic: Post Graduation Day Part 2

Jul 02, 2010 22:04

Title: Pebbles in My Shoes
Author: damnskippytoo
Rating: PG
Characters: Cordelia, Angel
Summary: AU moment set on the evening after the Mayor/big snake fight and the high school going kerplooey.
Word Count: 1,342
Note: I don't remember if Cordy knew about Angel and Buffy's break up, so excuse the non-canon error if she did.
Note 2: This was written a few ( Read more... )

fiction, 321-322 graduation day

Comments 10

nikkiwawa79 July 3 2010, 02:19:28 UTC

Awwww! I still love reading this ♥

She flashed the smile she knew could convince a drowning man to give her his only floatation device.

So true lmao Angel was under that thrall many times :D

damnskippytoo July 4 2010, 01:29:04 UTC

Thanks, Nikki. Cordy did affect Angel in many different ways. Most of them good. ;)

samsom July 3 2010, 04:24:57 UTC

I'm gonna try and do this without gushing, but you know - you might want to slip on the boots, just in case....:P

I love this. It's so quiet and companionable, if that's a word. You have *such* a talent for getting their voices down. The way Cordy backhands her compliments, and that way of cracking open Angel's broodiness until he smiles...just a little. Just enough.

The image of his hand shaking like an addict, it's a little moment but it shows without a lot of words where Angel's at, and thus how far Cordelia will take him after that. It's perfect. I hope you write more, there's not enough fic from you. *bats eyelashes*

damnskippytoo July 4 2010, 01:35:48 UTC

Thanks, bb. I like the addict moment as well. For me, it speaks to Angel's need for violence and his uncertainty about what his future holds. So thanks for noticing it and feeling it. And Cordy...what else is there to say? She's the queen. :D

brutti_ma_buoni July 3 2010, 20:25:02 UTC

I know this can't be canon, but it feels as though it should be - just slotting in perfectly to where their relationship starts to develop. Great view of the characters and where they were at this point in time.

(Though I do slightly want a Cordy in Bakersfield/Xander in Oxnard AU...)

Thanks for posting!

damnskippytoo July 4 2010, 01:38:28 UTC

(Though I do slightly want a Cordy in Bakersfield/Xander in Oxnard AU...)

LOL! That would be an interesting AU and now that you've put it out there in the universe, no doubt someone will write it.

Thanks very much for your comments!

moscow_watcher July 4 2010, 21:45:31 UTC

IAdorable story.

She flashed the smile she knew could convince a drowning man to give her his only floatation device.

Surrender, Angel! Resistance is futile! :)))

damnskippytoo July 4 2010, 22:20:39 UTC

Surrender, Angel! Resistance is futile!

Don't you know it, babe. He never hand a chance. ;)

Thanks for reading!

sentine July 5 2010, 12:14:39 UTC

You're so perfectly in Cordelia's head, it's impressive!

Vuitton makeup case + duffel bag, again it's so perfectly her... And the Easter Parade line? I could hear her voice.

Oh well, I think you guessed I loved it ;)

damnskippytoo July 5 2010, 17:02:44 UTC

I love Cordy's head so I'm happy to be inside it. Glad you enjoyed this little journey. Thank you! :)