Flash challenge: mortality rate

Jun 18, 2010 20:14

Boy, this took me to an unexpectedly sad place...

Title: Mortality Rate
Rating: PG
Words: 250
Character: Xander
Prompt: The Prom flash challenge 'the lowest mortality rate of any graduating class in Sunnydale history'
A/N: all credit to buffy.wikia.com for the student list!

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velvetwhip June 18 2010, 21:56:37 UTC
This is so touching and real.

Gabrielle

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brutti_ma_buoni June 18 2010, 22:00:00 UTC
Thank you! It's tough being a Sunnydale student.

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sentine June 18 2010, 23:35:46 UTC
What was their motto? "The future is ours"?

Very bittersweet, I love it.

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brutti_ma_buoni June 19 2010, 19:26:30 UTC
Yeah. The 'assuming we survive' bit is unspoken, most of the time, isn't it?

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perpetual June 19 2010, 03:16:17 UTC
That was fantastic. I can't believe you got that much emotion and characterization into such a short fic.

I love the way Xander is dealing with all this turmoil but hiding it for the sake of Buffy and the others. And that death list...there's just so much going on for him, for all of them.

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brutti_ma_buoni June 19 2010, 19:29:26 UTC
Thanks so much! Just occasionally, that overwhelming sense of how awful it must be to grow up in Sunnydale shows up in the fic.

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brutti_ma_buoni June 19 2010, 19:32:40 UTC
It's pretty tough, being one of those kids, isn't it? Thanks!

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daiseechain June 19 2010, 20:46:28 UTC
Lovely. Sad, but lovely.

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brutti_ma_buoni June 21 2010, 20:28:24 UTC
Thank you! Now, with extra angst...

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