Comments | fanomy: Chuck fic: When it hurts, it mean.

fanomy

Chuck fic: When it hurts, it mean.

Nov 28, 2009 12:15

Fic: When it hurts, it's mean ( Read more... )

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caz251 November 28 2009, 12:47:41 UTC

A few small grammar and spelling mistakes but apart from that it was great, love Ellie knowing that Chuck hasn't liked Sarah that way for a while now.

fanomy November 28 2009, 14:07:48 UTC

would you mind pointing them out to me, I have no beta.

caz251 November 28 2009, 14:18:45 UTC

It's mostly things like capital letters, but there are a few things like profilers, sweetie and the fact that Sarah called the General Sir instead of Maam. Title's like Agent etc should also be capitalised.

fanomy November 28 2009, 17:52:14 UTC

sorry about the capital letters I thought I was cearfull(SP? how do I spell that?) about that, profilers was because spell-check didn't show me the right one, sweetie is right in the USA which the language of the L_J spell-check. As for sir, that is actually the correct term, not many know this but Sir is non gender, even though the general is usually lacks about this I would think the case would be different when she is mad.