That was absolutley fantastic. The way your words just slotted together so naturally, the way the characters stories and dialogue flowed so perfectly- it was incredible! Well done.
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
And thank you SO much for pointing out the HTML fail. LJ has been all in italics for me since July. It's so annoying. I was sure I'd let one slip by and not notice and sure enough...
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Excellent!
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I really enjoyed this story!
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BTW, I think the html got a little messed up in the last part.
Great job!
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And thank you SO much for pointing out the HTML fail. LJ has been all in italics for me since July. It's so annoying. I was sure I'd let one slip by and not notice and sure enough...
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