Thursday, The Seventh Lesson

Mar 15, 2010 21:08

Oneshot
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Sungmin
Warning: Character Death

A/N: I'm lack of fluff idea so.. sorry everyone. Well, my seventh lesson on Thursday is actually my favourite lesson, Dancing! xD The ants thing came from a song 'Kisah Kasih di Sekolah' by Chrisye (it's seriously a happy song, I wonder how it inspired this).

I small smiled seeing ants queuing on the wall. I felt like they were staring at me, wondering what in the world could I do in this place. 'Waiting for a love' I answered silently. )

kyumin, oneshot

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onetruemei March 15 2010, 14:09:10 UTC
AMMA

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fanmin March 15 2010, 14:15:33 UTC
Twinnie's SPOT

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vivalapaparazzi March 16 2010, 14:04:16 UTC
WOOH YAY FOR SPOTS!:3

OMG...Kyuuuuuuuuuu~ /sobs

Awwwww...it's sad but...beautiful~ Closure...is good...right?

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fanmin March 17 2010, 12:59:35 UTC
:D I want to spot for you first but our Amma sure is a ninja

Aw, is it? Thank you~! Well the ending is supposedly good
Min moves on
though I don't like it. Min should have just died too -.-

Thanks for reading, Twinnie~! love you!

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fuyumis4 March 15 2010, 15:37:29 UTC
YAY!
i'm early!
OMG!
this is so beautiful! :D
though i think i spot a grammatical error that is rarely there.
*i small smiled
i do not understand that part! :D
i love you! :D
this has such a happy ending even though its angst and character death .....

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fanmin March 16 2010, 10:24:15 UTC
Oh yes, you're the first ^.^

Ow >.< I always suck at grammar T.T I don't know where to find beta
I don't know. How to say smiling but not as wide as usual smile? smile but so slightly? :S

Aww I love you too!!

Yes, happy ending. But I don't like this. I'd rather just kill Min but.. well, this ending comes.

Thanks for reading! <333

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fuyumis4 March 31 2010, 06:11:37 UTC
you know i have a suggestion.....
yo could ask my sis...
she is really good in english unlike me i got a B in english on the latest exam..
sucks like hell...

you could just say a small smile crept to my face or maybe i smiled a small smile...i think? 0.0

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fanmin March 31 2010, 12:15:55 UTC
can I ask her help then, for my next fic? I'll be really grateful ^.^
Thanks for the suggestions! They're very useful for me! <333

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x3sujudbskx33 March 15 2010, 21:15:38 UTC
That was sad. :'[ Poor Kyumin.

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fanmin March 16 2010, 10:25:50 UTC
Uh, sorry.. I love Kyumin but can't help to break them again and again T.T
Thanks for reading~!

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xopinkkyuminox March 15 2010, 22:31:33 UTC
*sobs

Gah. This is...
NICE!

I just cried.
Well, I'm too touched.
Silly me
xD

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fanmin March 16 2010, 10:29:48 UTC
Ahh, really?
You're not silly at all, don't worry
It makes me happy if this really could touch you xDDD
*shares tissue*
Thanks for reading~~ :3

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xopinkkyuminox March 16 2010, 13:12:08 UTC
No problem...

I just noticed that your fics really touch me even though at times, I wouldn't comment. LOLz

Keep writing more :))

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fanmin March 17 2010, 12:31:54 UTC
>///< I'm seriously glad they do!
Because I thought my fics were all too chessy ^^;
It's okay~ I'm not forcing anyone to comment, just do if you want to ^.^ (though yes I'd love it more if you comment :3)
I will, as long ideas appear in my brain! Love you!

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