I had a comment half-written in Notepad that I managed to delete, ok :p
Well. I loved the unfinished bit of this I saw. And I mean loved, because it was awesome. But the finished version is beyond awesome and I think it's one of the best things you've ever written.
The setup is fantastic and it really works through Zayn's eyes. There's some lovely backstory too and hints of the wider picture, which makes it so much more than smut. And your Louis! You've got his speech patterns so bang on ♥
If I had a 'you tried and it was awesome' gif, I'd use it ;)
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Well. I loved the unfinished bit of this I saw. And I mean loved, because it was awesome. But the finished version is beyond awesome and I think it's one of the best things you've ever written.
The setup is fantastic and it really works through Zayn's eyes. There's some lovely backstory too and hints of the wider picture, which makes it so much more than smut. And your Louis! You've got his speech patterns so bang on ♥
If I had a 'you tried and it was awesome' gif, I'd use it ;)
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