Compilation of Final Fantasy VII - Cloud/Tifa (#29, Breakdown)

[amethyst_key]

Title: Delayed Grief
Fandom: Compilation of Final Fantasy VII
Characters: Cloud/Tifa
Prompt: #29, Breakdown
Word Count: 1,354
Rating: PG
Summary: He wanted to apologize to her for leaving without a word, for abandoning her and Marlene and Denzel, but the words wouldn’t come and he began to think that, maybe, showing her without words would be enough.

Comments

[qwi_xux]

Awww, sweet ending! I like how you did that. I'm not sure what I said to help you finish it, but I'm glad you were able to do it. :D And I like that you made a point of mentioning that he had to gain back her trust, because trust is something that's earned.

Oh, I have one thing to point out as your beta, but I'll send you a message. Nothing big. ;) And now I'll just say CUUUUUUTE ending. :D :D :D

[amethyst_key]

Thank you! I'm glad that you like the ending. (I was kind of feeling like I ended it too soon!)

I'm not sure what I said to help you finish it, but I'm glad you were able to do it.

Well, when I was trying to think of an ending, you made a comment on something that I had Tifa say that went along the lines of, "Why would she be asking how did he know he wouldn't leave?" That caused me to think, which caused me to erase the line, which caused me to go in a different direction, which caused me to have the ending I wrote down. :) So, you did help me finish it.

[dillyxdally]

*saves to read later* I can't read fics while i'm online because of my stupid pay as you go internet. ¬_¬

But i'll definitely post back with a review. =3 And for your springkink one too.

[amethyst_key]

:D No problem! Take your time!

[lammybug]

Oh how I love reading about Cloti.

Yes, he has to do more than just show her. We girls need to hear it too.

[amethyst_key]

We girls need to hear it too.

That we do!

(Thanks for reading!)

[windrider1]

so sweet! Cloud has a lot to make up for!He has much more to do before everything is ok between them. ♥

[amethyst_key]

Thank you!

Cloud has a lot to make up for!He has much more to do before everything is ok between them.

Very true!

[iskra_revoir]

Thank you! *hugs* I am feeling better, at least my tummy isn´t hurting and now that I charged my Cloti batteries I can go on with homework!

Words may not be the only way to tell somebody what you are thinking... but they sure help a lot! And with Cloud and Tifa, I think that despite their relationship being based in those little, important things, at some moments it may leave thing weighing in their minds, and I liked how you aborded the issue, the reasons you gave to Cloud for going away, his little acts of reassurance and his reflections on Tifa ♥

I would have liked to see what brought Tifa´s breakdown though, because she is not one to just randomly burst into tears. Maybe a theme for other fic? :P

[amethyst_key]

*hugs back* I'm so glad that you're feeling better! I'm glad that this could recharge your cloti batteries! ♥

Words are definitely not the only way to tell someone how you feel, but they certainly help and are sometimes the best thing. Especially for girls!

I'm glad that you liked it, though. :D

I would have liked to see what brought Tifa´s breakdown though, because she is not one to just randomly burst into tears. Maybe a theme for other fic?

LOL! You're so demanding! ;) But, no, that would be a good fic to write. Hmmm... *dashes off to Microsoft Word*