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Prince of Tennis: Kikumaru Eiji - 012 - Orange

Mar 29, 2007 08:45

Title: Visiting Daisuke ( Read more... )

Comments 8

dizzy_grace March 29 2007, 15:59:40 UTC

Awww! I loved it! They're all just so cute and huggable! I liked Keiko and how suspicious she was. That was great. ^_^. The best part was the end though when Yuushi met him before he could barely get inside the house. That was adorable!

andersenmom March 29 2007, 16:07:39 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

I like Keiko; she's feisty. Even if she didn't need to be with Eiji.

angel_katchan March 29 2007, 21:36:09 UTC

Wow, Daisuke has a wife. I like her though. She's not overly controlling, or complete flake. She's very levelheaded yet lively in a way. She's good for him.

I like the dinner. I love her gushing over Yuushi. It's cute. and Yuushi meeting Eiji practically at the door; that was so cute! He missed his Eiji. Now he has to show how much.

andersenmom March 29 2007, 22:35:37 UTC

I'm glad you liked her! I needed her to be a good match for Daisuke - because he wouln't have married just any woman, you know?

I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write.

chouta_angel March 29 2007, 21:40:43 UTC

I like it. It's like, Eiji's tying up all the loose ends from when he was younger so that he can truly move on and be completely happy. He's ending the questions, the doubts, closing it up all. Only, not closing it up in a destructive way, but more like, settling it all and then placing it on a shelf or in a desk drawer. He knows it's there, but it's no longer interferring with his life.

I don't know if that made any sense at all. It's hard to explain a concept sometimes.

andersenmom March 29 2007, 22:36:55 UTC

No, I understood. He was reconnecting, too, a little, so that his previous friend knew he'd gotten better.

I'm glad you liked it!

wiccanlilly March 30 2007, 13:57:01 UTC

Loved this! Loved Daisuke, loved his wife, loved Eiji :) It's nice to see him working on repairing bridges that Eiji thought he had burned, so to speak, and remembering that *some* good did come into his life because of Fuji's actions. It didn't all have to be tainted :)

Awesome job :)

andersenmom March 30 2007, 14:04:23 UTC

Oooh, nice. I hadn't thought of that! What a great way to look at it. Thank you.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.