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fandoria

Teaser Tuesday

Jan 05, 2010 11:51

Wow, it feels like forever since I last posted one of these. But seeing how it's the first Tuesday of the year, it feels somehow appropriate to post my first ever teaser for Dreamwalker. This book will be told in alternating first person narratives and to start us out is my female MC, Rachel. So without further ado...

( Meet Rachel )

dreamwalker, in a sharing mood

Comments 14

faerie_writer January 5 2010, 17:31:55 UTC

OMG, that was awesome!! What a great beginning to a story! It really *really* makes me want to read more! :D

fandoria January 5 2010, 21:59:18 UTC

Thank you very much!

skywriter1 January 5 2010, 17:42:22 UTC

Awesome start! Got me interested and wanting more.

fandoria January 5 2010, 21:59:30 UTC

Thanks! I'm quite pleased with it, myself.

olmue January 5 2010, 19:25:04 UTC

Nice! I especially like the very last line--he is just as confused as she is.

fandoria January 5 2010, 22:00:23 UTC

Thanks. He sure is confused. lol We get to jump into his POV after that line.

shaelise January 5 2010, 20:45:32 UTC

Love this!

fandoria January 5 2010, 22:00:30 UTC

YAY! Thank you!

meredith_wood January 5 2010, 20:55:15 UTC

Soo good! Get to writing some more,like, now! :-)

fandoria January 5 2010, 22:01:21 UTC

I'm working on it. I've got 500 words on the next chapter, in Rider's POV. But he's slower to write than Rachel so far. Hopefully that'll change as I get used to him, whereas I've had Rachel in my head, bossing me around, for almost two years now.