Fic: Have It Your Way (can't stand the night)

Jun 18, 2013 09:52

Title: Have It Your Way (can't stand the night)
Author: WhiskyInMind
Beta(s): TortuousPhoenix (special thanks to AlphaFlyer for pointing out the tense changes!)
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Fandom(s): Avengers (MCU)
Disclaimer: Not my sandbox, I'm just playing here
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Clint Barton/Natasha Romanov
Notes: Written as part of my ( Read more... )

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telaryn June 18 2013, 11:48:30 UTC
She doesn't cook. It's not that she can't cook; it's just...

*waggles finger* I see what you did thar, missy!

Ah Sho - I freaking *love* this! Such a simple concept and you've put so many wonderful layers in - the idea that this should be so simple, that *they* should be so simple, and despite all the complications it works.

Thank you so much! I'm going to be replaying this one in my head all day. *g*

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whiskyinmind June 18 2013, 13:06:49 UTC
*glomps you*

I had so many ideas for where I wanted this to go (hence me taking two months to actually sit down and write it!) and it ended up being calmer and much more intimate than I originally thought it would be!

I'm so glad you like it honey!

*waggles finger* I see what you did thar, missy!

*grins*

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alphaflyer June 18 2013, 13:53:02 UTC
Love this -- especially the little details. The "essential Clintness". The queues, unprecedented everywhere but Russia. Oh, and the feels ... Very nicely done.

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whiskyinmind June 18 2013, 13:56:37 UTC
Thank you so much! I actaully visited Russia about a year after the McDonalds opened in Moscow and there were *still* queues almost around the block to get in to it!

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astridv June 18 2013, 14:06:33 UTC
Oh, love this. Great character stuff.

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whiskyinmind June 18 2013, 14:10:31 UTC
Thank you sweetie!

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shenshen77 June 18 2013, 17:22:08 UTC
I really enjoyed this a great deal, I like the characters you create here and I love how much of them and their relationship you show us even though they're hardly in the same room at the same time. Very nicely done!

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whiskyinmind June 20 2013, 12:44:03 UTC
Thank you so much! From what we see of them in the movie(s) they're so internalised with the truth that it seemed to make more sense to keep them apart for a while and make it almost a stream of consciousness if that makes sense?

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crazy4orcas June 18 2013, 17:25:52 UTC
I loves these kinds of quick scenes that just have all kinds of layers and feels to them -- wonderfully done!

And WhiskeyInMind -- the Christian Kane song???

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whiskyinmind June 20 2013, 12:44:38 UTC
Thank you so much!

And yup! Although I'm Scottish so it's whisky without the e... *grins*

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