[Fanfiction] The Only Man For The Job (3/3), by callieach

[callieach]

Title: The Only Man For The Job: And everything's right in the universe (3/3)
Author: callieach
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Character/Pairing: McCoy-centric, with Kirk/McCoy, Spock, Scotty, Uruha, Chekov, Keenser, OCs
Rating: R
Word Count: 2385
Summary: A planetside mission gone wrong.
Warnings: language, injury, other not kid friendly things
Disclaimer:

Comments

[anne_higgins]

Wonderful job! Good emotion, believable medical problems, just super.

(Although you might want to make Jim's speech in sickbay a little less complete sentence perfect. It didn't suggest he was struggling to survive at all.)

But BRAVO!

[xxxxbulletsxxxx]

I loved this, especially the ending.

[nictusa]

oh, yay! this story was awesome, even if you did put kirk through hell and handgrenades and back :) ( i can just imagine him screaming, DAMMIT, I'M TOO PRETTY TO DIIIIEEE!)

[callieach]

Ya, that's what he said during the first draft of the story, the one with the sappy ending. *snorts*

Thanks for the comment. :)

[lisamariedavis]

Yes! I'm all about the happy ending!!!

[callieach]

Yay!
:)

[elvinborn]

"The antidote stopped your heart. I used the defibrillator, but that ruined the work I'd done to get your lung to stay together."

"So my lung's not together?"
so very very blunt, Bones. and then Jim's response made me laugh

Prime Directive in Case of Death Number One
ha! he's planned it out and it has a TITLE!!!

and then with the aww and the yay. good story!

[callieach]

Hee. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you bushels for your comments. :D