[Fanfiction] Time Bomb (2/3), by callieach

[callieach]

Title: "Time Bomb" (Part Two of Three: Ticking )
Author: callieach
Fandoms: Doctor Who, Torchwood
Characters: Donna, The Doctor, Martha, Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Mickey
Rating: PG-13
Words: 2029
Disclaimer: If I owned either of these series, I would be not only British, but also not still-heartbroken over season finales.
Author's Notes: I've been working on this

Comments

[beautifulntime]

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

You leave it there?!?!?!?!? Gah! Update, please! Must have update! *pulls out hair*

[/freaking out]

K, anyway I looked at your journal on the off chance you'd updated and you had! It's still so wonderful and I'm loving it. Seriously, though, update soon. *loves*

[callieach]

Whoops. I guess I forgot to cross-post this.... :\

Thank you for the comment! The last installment should be up within a few days!

[beautifulntime]

Meh, no biggie. When you post the third piece, would you mind putting it up on the 'season4b' comm? That's where I found it first and I'm sure the people on the comm would love to see the rest of it.

Alternatively, I can't wait til the next/last piece is out! Fantastic, yet again!

[willowwood]

Even less funny was the big relic find in Rome, a monument to household gods no one has ever heard of before, including a box that looks suspiciously like the new police boxes in England, but even more like the one that’s landed on a Hollywood side street. - rotflmao! Love the mention of the relic. I bet there are even cave drawings somewhere featuring the TARDIS lol.

Yay! Gwen *loves* (Thank you!). I really like this interaction between Gwen and Martha, it felt a lot like the deleted scene between the two of them on the S2 dvds. You have seen that one haven't you? I remember sending you the Owen one but did I send that one too?? Anyway, great characterisations especially love the inclusion of Gwen's overly caring side *loves her some more and you for including it*, and the idea of Martha lying about contemplating what incision to make...especially considering the thing is already dead lol - it's very her.

Tosh and Owen! *wibbles*

If she wants to use a work-related metaphor, she’s lost a dossier so important she has to drop

[callieach]

I have seen that scene between Gwen and Martha... don't know if you sent it to me or not, but, yeah, I've seen it and used it as inspiration for this. Thank goodness for that, too, since they never really intereacted at any other time during the series and I wouldn't've had a clue how to do it.

I feel flattered by how often you use the word "brilliant" in your reviews. *blushes* Oh, I wish I were...

One tiny little mistake, it's actually the Roald Dahl Plassa - Fuck! I Googled that, like, twice, and even looked up "plass" because I'd never heard the word before. It's Norwegian for plaza and since I thought Dahl was a Norwegian name, I assumed it worked. D:

I was so sure the TARDIS was just gonna appear at the last possible second and the Doctor would sweep in and save the day!!! You can't leave it there!! - *snickers* Haven't I already explained the plot to you? So you have no right to freak. But, yeah, yeah, part three'll be up before next Monday (sooner if the Doctor stops giving me a hard time about his dialogue).

♥♥