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[Fanfiction] There is no relationship, by callieach

Jun 17, 2008 22:00

Title: There is no relationship.
Author: callieach
Fandom: Bones
Character(s)/Pairing: Angela, Brennan, Zack, Jack (with distinct A/J undertones)
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1 204
Disclaimer: Ha! As if.
Authors Notes: Big thanks to willowwood for assuring me this made sense. *hugs* Feedback = ♥.
Summary: The memory’s like a ghost she can’t bear to look at, but can’t look ( Read more... )

*callieach, fandom: bones, character: angela montenegro, medium: fanfiction, pairing: angela/jack

Comments 5

willowwood June 18 2008, 23:21:17 UTC

You know m'dear you're gonna get yourself quite the reputation if you keep starting your fics with all of these wonderful opening paragraphs! ;) ;). Seriously thought I love the opening to this fic, how it instantly highlights and sets up the time scale for the canon, as well as giving us setting and a hint at what's causing Angela's inner turmoil all in a wonderfully compacted three lines. It just works so perfectly and nicely sets up the image of the 'ghost' that is a fantastic reoccurring theme throughout the entire fic, I especially love it when Angela starts having a bit of a panic attack and you can actually visualise the "ghost" becoming more prominent and visible in the room...Now I might have just been watching way to much TW lmao, but just the very idea of that just seems so perfect, the imagery of this distant figure becoming brighter and more visible replaying past events over and over. Wonderful ( ... )

callieach June 22 2008, 17:26:47 UTC

Well you're going to get a reputation for leaving km-long comments to all my fics. ;)

Thanks, sweetie, for all of this. I'm flattered. ♥ (And I totally agree with the tense muscle feeling and the wallsmex. Mrawr.)

willowwood June 22 2008, 17:32:34 UTC

Rotflmao I thought I already had ;) ;) ;).

*is once again distracted by the idea of wallsmex and muscles*

*drools*

mini_miss June 21 2008, 05:46:40 UTC

Wow. That was... beautifully heartbreaking. And very, very intense. Wonderful. You managed to make me stop breathing quite a few times. The emotions, you can feel it.

Dakotah, please write a novel one day.

callieach June 22 2008, 16:54:50 UTC

Thank you! :)

And I'd love to write a novel some day... if I ever have the time and inspiration.