FIC: Such A Squalid Little Ending (Chess) (un_love_you #1)

Oct 13, 2007 00:26

Title: Such A Squalid Little Ending
Author: chicafrom3
Fandom: Chess
Characters: Freddie Trumper/Florence Vassy
Prompt: un_love_you #1. You were right about me
Word Count: 378
Rating: PG
Summary: Who'd ever think it?/Such a squalid little ending/Watching you descending/Just as far as you can go/I'm learning/Things I didn't want to know/Who'd ever guess/That this would ( Read more... )

challenge: un_love_you, char: chess: freddie trumper, pairing: freddie/florence, fandom: chess, char: chess: florence vassy

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starletfallen October 13 2007, 07:15:37 UTC
Okay, keep in mind that I am drunk right now. On vodka, amusingly. And perhaps ironically. Erm. Anyway.

Aubrey and I both like this story. The writing itself is a little stilted, and at the moment, I can't think of a way to fix that, but the story, the dialogue, is wonderful. :)

Brava.

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fandomfrom3 October 15 2007, 00:05:23 UTC
The writing itself is a little stilted,

I think I see what you mean, but, um, it's tech week and my thoughts aren't clear enough to find a way to fix it. Will think on this once I have had a chance to sleep.

And, hee at the vodka. How utterly appropriate. :D

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starletfallen October 15 2007, 00:09:43 UTC
:D Hey, tech week is a good excuse for anything. I know.

^_^ Yeah, vodka is good.

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fandomfrom3 October 15 2007, 00:17:11 UTC
Advice: never schedule dry tech and cue-to-cue for the same day and count on getting a one-hour break in between. It won't happen.

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kawaiispinel October 13 2007, 14:36:28 UTC
I totally agree with Evie about the dialogue being amazing. It was dead-on and I loved how it was just so delightfully tense that you could feel how awkward the conversation was for both of them. ^__^

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fandomfrom3 October 15 2007, 00:07:39 UTC
They're so much fun to write dialogue for, because they have this tendency to not really come out and say what they mean, but still understand it.

And, um. obv I have not slept.

Thanks! :D I'm thrilled you liked it, I really am. *bounce*

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dreamsofstars October 14 2007, 02:23:54 UTC
*wibbles for Freddie*

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fandomfrom3 October 15 2007, 00:07:50 UTC
He makes me sad. :(

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