Title: Such A Squalid Little Ending
Author:
chicafrom3Fandom: Chess
Characters: Freddie Trumper/Florence Vassy
Prompt:
un_love_you #1. You were right about me
Word Count: 378
Rating: PG
Summary: Who'd ever think it?/Such a squalid little ending/Watching you descending/Just as far as you can go/I'm learning/Things I didn't want to know/Who'd ever guess/That this would
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Aubrey and I both like this story. The writing itself is a little stilted, and at the moment, I can't think of a way to fix that, but the story, the dialogue, is wonderful. :)
Brava.
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I think I see what you mean, but, um, it's tech week and my thoughts aren't clear enough to find a way to fix it. Will think on this once I have had a chance to sleep.
And, hee at the vodka. How utterly appropriate. :D
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^_^ Yeah, vodka is good.
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And, um. obv I have not slept.
Thanks! :D I'm thrilled you liked it, I really am. *bounce*
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