although our undivided loves are one:

Jan 10, 2012 19:25

Title: although our undivided loves are one:
Fandom/Pairing: Doctor Who, River/Eleven
Rating: K+
Wordcount: 3,234
Summary: He told her wherever they needed to go, and she’d set off with purpose. He pushes levers that don’t need to be pushed, because this flight seems to be all hers. His old girl. 
although our undivided loves are one: )

one-shot, rating: k+, gidget fic, fandom: doctor who

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welshred January 11 2012, 00:52:33 UTC
Ugh kissy times in the swingy chair. So gorgeous. Bittersweet thoughts chased away with touches. And I love how you write the Doctor as he is falls a little in love with her in spite of himself. MORE!!I

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youve_got_wings January 11 2012, 02:46:27 UTC
This is so cute and so fluffy *sigh*

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bendingwind January 11 2012, 03:57:09 UTC
Awww, this is adorable and happy and they are just so perfect jkljaskdlfjkdls.

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betawho January 11 2012, 04:10:39 UTC
I LOVE it! "You didn't say hello to me properly"! Oh, he's gone. Completely gone. Lucky lucky man.

It's amazing how them, just kissing innocently, can be sexier than other characters getting full on body contact.

They so enjoy each other. Thank you for writing them this way.

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betawho January 11 2012, 04:14:09 UTC
Oh, I also loved the line about how he's intrigued about how her hair works. :D LOL!

He's just so fascinated with her. I wonder what she sees in him? (I mean from a sexy viewpoint. Our culture is designed so much around the male gaze that we sometimes forget there's gotta be something fascinating and compelling about the males too. There's a prompt for you. What about the Doctor, physically, fascinates River and turns her on?)

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silvainshadows January 11 2012, 04:29:15 UTC
This is wonderful and adorable and I love it.

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