Title: If I Could Only Make Her Smile Then She'd Be Mine

Aug 21, 2009 07:00

Title: If I Could Only Make Her Smile Then She'd Be Mine
Rating: K
Series: Domesticated Sexay
Spoilers: nooooooooone
A/N: Eh this kind of wrote itself so blame the universe and not me if its crap LOL!!

If I Could Only Make Her Smile Then She'd Be Mine )

babylon_whore fic, rating: k, babylon_whore: domesticated sexay, babylon_whore: series

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pandj1958 August 21 2009, 06:33:05 UTC
I just shouted OH MY GOD WOW when I saw this *does happy dance*

"She tries to frame it but it can't be enclosed, won't stand still long enough to be circumscribed by sentences. Besides. It's all just words. Descriptions of feelings. Descriptions not feelings. They never equate. How can they?"

That right there is beautiful. Thanks for posting this you have made my day.

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babylon_whore August 21 2009, 07:41:47 UTC
Awww thanks a million!!

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gidget_zb August 21 2009, 07:00:29 UTC
YOU ROCK.

THE END.

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babylon_whore August 21 2009, 07:42:31 UTC
TRUE STORY.

LOL.

I totally found another story too that I had like 3/4 writtend so Imma gonna finish that off today! Look at the Triumveriate being all awesome!!

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gidget_zb August 21 2009, 07:50:16 UTC
Ossum, forgetful - is there a difference? Hahaha.

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claireterm August 21 2009, 16:08:22 UTC
This is really beautiful... thanks for posting

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i_am_davnee August 21 2009, 20:14:07 UTC
She is lost then, in this moment, in their silent absolution. In the feel of home and things being right

Happy sigh. This was beautiful as always. I've missed this series. Glad to see it back to brighten my day. :)

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seagull08 August 23 2009, 03:23:58 UTC
Bautiful.Very beautiful

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