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fic: What They Don't Say the Military Will Teach You

Sep 02, 2008 21:02

Title: What They Don't Say the Military Will Teach You
Rating: T
Spoilers: through 4x04
Summary: "He's frakkin' her. Been at it for weeks now."

A/N: For angiescully, who wanted Bill and Laura and their relationship viewed through someone else's eyes (or them getting caught). And somehow this is what my brain morphed that into. So... fair warning.

( What They Don't Say the Military Will Teach You )

alias: one shot, alias fic, rating: t

Comments 72

aprilleigh24 September 3 2008, 01:44:39 UTC

Beautiful. Wonderful. Perfectly sumtty.

Love the story and how it all came together. THanks for writing this, and thanks for sharing!

alias424 September 3 2008, 11:29:15 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought it all came together well!

cely September 3 2008, 01:55:49 UTC

I loved it!!

alias424 September 3 2008, 11:29:34 UTC

I'm so glad!

unavitasegreta September 3 2008, 02:24:14 UTC

Yeah, I'm kinda loving you for this. Yep, I totally am. It was a unique perspective and a fun look at how their guards would see them. They are with them so much that it's so fully of potential. And you captured that in such an amusing way. Then again, you always do. Always.

alias424 September 3 2008, 11:32:07 UTC

At first I had planned on doing only part of this in the guard's POV and then maybe sticking some Cottle and Tigh in there, but the guards just see so much that I got a little hung up. Heh. I should go out of my way to make whatever I write next incredibly sad and not at all amusing. If I can get my muse to cooperate.

unavitasegreta September 3 2008, 13:15:01 UTC

Because you are evil and your muse refuses to give in to your evil ways?

Ok, ok, I suppose we do need some sad too. I guess ... lol.

alias424 September 4 2008, 00:38:01 UTC

Me? Evil? *whistles innocently* I have noooo idea what you're talking about....

Actually, the fic!evil's been pretty reined in with A/R. It would probably be insane if it ever escaped.

trialia September 3 2008, 02:41:38 UTC

Both dying of giggles like a 14-year-old girl and squeeful over how yummy this fic is. Thank you for posting it :D

alias424 September 3 2008, 11:32:55 UTC

Hee! Squeeful is such a great word. Thank YOU for commenting!

ladytia September 3 2008, 03:02:21 UTC

This wins so much!

I love it, I like the perspective that you used. Total win, bb.

alias424 September 3 2008, 11:33:53 UTC

*sigh of relief that you liked the perspective* I didn't mean for it to take over the whole fic, but am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!