“Nav?”
“Go!”
“FTL?”
“Go!”
“Tactical?”
“Go!”
“Flight ops?”
“Go!”
Tigh rotated through the stations as he stood across from Bill at the command console. The faces surrounding them looked tense, and a kind of excited anticipation hung in the air over the CIC, despite the blows they had been dealt today. Bill watched as each station called out
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praying that her skirt hadn’t ridden up
That is....the exact opposite of what I was praying for.
Laura should say asses more. In general. Its hot.
Requisite Billy SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
where she could convince her husband to run with
oh you bitch, you kill me with small lines like this. I hate you!!!
eyeing her in a way that had made her skin crawl with some instinctual warning as she had smiled politely, shook his hand and avoided him the rest of the day.
Dear Gaius
No. Laura will not be joining your harem.
your loss.
fangurls everywhere.
- I’m sure I wouldn’t remember me either
She clearly does not own a mirror.
She sighed softly, glancing out the window and sending a prayer to the Gods above that Bill would understand. She loved him - Gods, did she love him - but this was survival, and she had to be a President first, and a wife later ( ... )
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And funny story of the day - I am fairly certain you reacted to some bits the EXACT SAME WAY Alias did during the beta, lmao.
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LMAO, well DUH. We're a triumverate of brainsharing awesome
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Will comment further later on, but I was hoping you'd get this up before I had to go catch my flight this morning!
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*runs to read*
ETA: It's totally not wrong that I liked Lee in his hero moment. Also, *YAY!!!* for Laura deciding to deal with Bill later. I really cannot wait to see how all of this will unfold. I will however, point out that you are of RDM evil by making us wait another week for the follow-up.
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Wow. That is a lot of typos. OMGS! lol
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I fail. It seems my comments need betas.
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For a brief moment in the flash, he could hear her laugh and see a flash of auburn to the right, but when the world righted itself, he was left with empty space and an even emptier soul
KDSLAJKDJSJADFK; *FLAILS*
The "collective asses" line never fails to make me laugh (and sqquee a little bit at Laura cursing XD).
where she could convince her husband to run with them
It's the simple little lines like this that make me squee so hard! :D
as if trying to discern exactly how well he had known her. As if.
AHAHAHA. As if, indeed. XD
but she could handle Bill.
I'm sure she can... Ahem. *cough*
She loved him - Gods, did she love him - but this was survival, and she had to be a President first, and a wife later.
My favourite line. Perfect. XD
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Glad you liked it.
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Can't wait to the next part!
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