I think I'm a workaholic.... :/

Oct 06, 2008 10:37

COMPARISON TIME!!!

Final Lineart )

doujinshi, bleach, travel

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redfraction October 6 2008, 20:10:10 UTC
Wow, I love your inking!
and you're really good at drawing different angles XD

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fanartist October 6 2008, 21:04:50 UTC
He he ^///^ Thank you!

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koi_suru_usagi October 6 2008, 20:18:59 UTC
Nicely done.
I'd say a little bit more line variation though.

Besides that lovely.

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fanartist October 6 2008, 21:01:53 UTC
The line quality? Or the camera angles?

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koi_suru_usagi October 6 2008, 21:19:39 UTC
I mean on certain parts try to make the lines a little thicker and in some places thinner.

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fanartist October 6 2008, 21:34:42 UTC
He he ^^;;

I'm scared to death that I might break the tip of the pen (I have a pretty heavy hand when I draw), so I've been holding back from using pressure ^^;

But I'll take this as a sign that I can press a little harder into the paper, tho :3

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tenshiyaki October 6 2008, 20:47:42 UTC
Very nice. :D I like a lot of your shots; they're really interesting! I think in the bottom right panel, though, Rukia's proportions look a bit off, especially since she's in the distance.

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fanartist October 6 2008, 21:08:33 UTC
...

... PHOTOSHOP TO THE RESCUE!!!

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tenshiyaki October 6 2008, 21:35:44 UTC
LOL TRUEDAT

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mazzie_may October 6 2008, 23:08:46 UTC
Gosh, wow. Maybe I don't pay enough attention to my FList, but it's been a long time since I've seen something so finished from you.

I forgot how much you impress me. I love your inking, and how you use semi-medium lines for so much of it. You don't get overly silly with thickness and don't let your program run wild with your art (i suffer heavily from this because the 'shine' tool elates me). I especially like how you managed to keep Rukia's hair soft. It's so sharp and angled in the show, you're left wondering where it is her and Cloud get their rubber cement. But here it's smooth and shiny, a nice gloss that doesn't look like glass.

Really, really good job! Like, very much :D I'm totally stoked for the rest of it.

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fanartist October 7 2008, 19:32:32 UTC
Actually, it HAS been a really long time since I uploaded anything finished anywhere on the internet (this goes for IRL too >>;;)

I'm really glad that the highlights look believable! ^o^ That was my biggest fear: getting the highlights to look like hair ^^;;

'Shine' tool?

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mazzie_may October 7 2008, 19:51:35 UTC
Yeah, there's something in the program I use (SAI) that gives things a glow or a shine, depending on the sharpness I set it to. Any time I attempt to colour, everything becomes v v v v shiny XDD

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windxalchemist October 7 2008, 00:04:41 UTC
;A;
it's so cute...still, even after all this time.
*laughs*

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fanartist October 8 2008, 00:03:06 UTC

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