Title: Headache (Part II of ?)
Rating: G
AN: I considered asking someone to beta this update for me, but I decided, I'd probably never post. So Forgive me. All mistakes are mine. And I'm sure there are plenty.
This was originally posted for the OCSFC #4. My sentence from
helen_c - Ryan has a headache; someone offers some TLC
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Anyway, you know I am loving this. It's wonderful to see a famous fic.
Poor Ryan...his pain was jumping off the pages.
The ending was tense. You know it's bad if Seth notices.
Now try and write more in-between work and family and life!
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Ryan's pain is palpable and the Cohen concern is strong. Can't wait to see a future update. :-)
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And I love your icon.
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“I know you have a lot of work,” Ryan said, wincing, alerting Kirsten that he was still in a lot of pain. “You don’t have to watch over me all day and play nurse.”
“I’m not playing nurse,” she huffed. “I’m playing mom. That’s what I do."
By the way, I can assure you that I'm feeling much, much better than Ryan is in this story. Your depiction of the pain of a migraine is very realistic. I know, since my sister-in-law suffered from them when my nephews were small and I used to go over and watch the boys for her during an attack. I hope your knowledge doesn't come from personal experience!
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While I've never had such a bad migraine, I've had headaches bad enough to make me vomit. So this is an exaggerated version of one! Thank goodness, it's been a few months since my last one.
And I'm proud to say, I started part 3. Luckily, my BF the PA works in the ER. *grins devilishly*
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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