All About Family

Jul 01, 2007 22:35

You aren't imagining it. This is a fic from me.

Title: All About Family
Rating: PG 13 Maybe even R
Summary: Ryan's Dad comes to Newport.
S4 with spoilers up to My Two Dads

Thank you to chazper for beta duties.
A reminder that I give credit to brandywine421's hurting Ryan fic: http://brandywine421. ( Read more... )

fanfic, oc, all about family

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60schic July 2 2007, 03:54:03 UTC
Yays...famous wrote almost-smut! Actually, it's lovely sweet and spicy romantic pre-sex...phew, that was a mouthful. I like Taylor the Tease and very naughty Ryan.

Your analogies (or are they metaphors?) were quite effective here, like: Ryan’s different emotions were twisting inside of him in a knot so tight, even a sailor would have trouble unraveling it.

And: He felt like he was on thin ice. A native of Southern California forced to face an East Coast winter for the first time.

I'm glad you're continuing this fic. With the show over, we need to know now more than ever how Ryan coped with his 2 dads.

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famous99 July 2 2007, 11:15:07 UTC
chazper said I was going to get complaints for closing the pool house door too early. I'm really glad you enjoyed. I hope to keep up some sort of writing this summer.

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beachtree July 2 2007, 04:59:46 UTC
I was just thinking about this fic the other day, but I never expected you to update. It's great to see that you're writing, although I'm not sure how you found the time ( ... )

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famous99 July 2 2007, 11:21:17 UTC
Good for you for snapping out of your LONG daze
Hee. I read this and thought you meant my long writing daze.

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beachtree July 2 2007, 18:00:00 UTC
Puh-leeze!

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helen_c July 2 2007, 05:06:48 UTC
Yay for locks, right? :) Very nice teasing Taylor, BTW.

How many of Ryan’s issues they had just let lie dormant because it appeared that Ryan had adjusted so well to Newport?
Too many, Sanfort. Way too many.

Nice to see the beginning of an epiphany, but I just hope it'll be enough for Sandy to actually help Ryan this time.

Loved the punching bag scene, and Ryan talking to Taylor...

Nice to see fic from you, famous!! :)

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famous99 July 2 2007, 11:22:32 UTC
I figured that at 18, the Cohens may have given Ryan a lock... or he would have had the guts to go by one and install it.

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fifimom July 2 2007, 06:12:02 UTC
So nice to read you. Everything has already been said so I'll just add my thanks for the update. I really enjoyed it. I hope you are feeling ok. Please keep us posted.

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famous99 July 2 2007, 11:23:03 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting!

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finlee July 2 2007, 09:57:59 UTC
Thanks famous! I need something great to read!

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famous99 July 2 2007, 11:24:13 UTC
Thanks finlee. Glad you enjoyed and glad I could oblige!

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