fic: a nation of rats (prime suspect)

[falseeeyelashes]

a nation of rats

prime suspect. you’re either on the take, or the take’s on you: detectives calderon and blando’s shared history in narcotics. lou/augie. 2214 words.

notes: LOL IDEK. i hate everything, my life, sisi, may, etc., etc. so the most recent episode of prime suspect included a little moment where they mentioned that lou and augie used

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[redinteriors]

AHHHHHHH MICHELLE!!!!! LOL oh man, I still can't believe you churned this out in like a couple of hours, hahahahaha, LUV U.

Omg this is seriously so great lsdkjfskdjfsk, your prose and the writing style you've used for this; the repeated phrases, the parts in parentheses, the short lines, GOD. UGH ROLLING AROUND IN THIS WORLD YOU'D MADE FOR THEM, IT'S SO GOOD. And Augie finding and keeping Lou's crucifix? LOL KILL ME such an awesome little detail ughhhhhh. I’m gonna end it, Augie stammers, I’m gonna end it and I’m gonna be good we’re gonna be real good I’m gonna end it but you gotta go you gotta run. THEY'RE GONNA BE REAL GOOD omg just f u Michelle F U!!!!

Just - ahhh, I am SO FASCINATED by their shared history and cops on the take so OF COURSE this is where my mind would go LOL. I love that you are totally on my wavelength hahahaha, and ugh I love this story so much Michelle, you don't even know. YOU ARE THE RIVER TO MY PEOPLE ♥

[hariboo]

I never even though of them as a ship before now. Now, I cannot unsee forever! You are magic in the water!!

Lou’s gold crucifix fell off that night. [...]

Something he would never learn:

Augie found it. Augie kept it.

IDKY BUT I FOUND THIS SO SADLY ROMANTICA AND I LOVE IT.