fic: lay my head on the hood of your car (new girl) (2/2)

[falseeeyelashes]

Comments

[quiet_rebel]

So awesome. I'm amazed at how you captured everyone's voice, and this show has only been on for like two weeks! That's only two episodes!

I loved that you made Jess/Nick sex dirty. Hehe. That kitchen counter scene was hot :)

[ozmissage]

Here via dollsome and OMG, this fic is a flail-inducing thing of beauty and joy! How do you write Jess so perfectly? How? And NICK. So hot. So perfect. Seriously awesome fic, dude. <333

[firthgal]

This was just pure amazingness. I have no idea how you got all of their voices so down pat after just three episodes, but OMG, this was flawless. Jess and Nick were perfection, but Schmidt, dude, you captured his douchey delightfulness in a way that makes me want to read an entire fic just about him annoying his roommates. That bit where he figures out that Nick and Jess are sleeping together just from Nick asking him if he's seen Jess? Yeah, that was so Schmidt, and so hilariously endearing that I just want more Schmidt. But oh how I adored the progression of the Nick/Jess relationship in this, and if I didn't already ship the heck out of them I'm pretty sure that this fic would convince me of their epic love to be. And I just have to mention that your Jess voice gives her so much more depth than the show does, but it's still so very in tune with the show. Like, I think that that depth is there, it's just that the show has yet to really emphasize it

[stitchesofgold]

THIS WAS AMAZING!

[eystri]

You. are. awesome. I feel like this show is definitely going in the Nick/Jess direction, but NOT FAST ENOUGH, DAMMIT. Thankfully there is fic to supplement the lack of sexytimes :)