This Battle

Sep 02, 2009 17:15

Three hours later….

Slowly opening her crusty dried eyes, Demi awoke to silence. Her head felt as if she had slammed it repeatedly against a brick wall. Judging by the residue around her eyes when she awoke, she realized she had been crying, though she couldn’t remember why. Then, all of a sudden, the memories of the last few hours came rushing ( Read more... )

part 2, rating: t, this battle, selena, dallas, fanfiction, demi

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cerasi05 September 2 2009, 23:18:11 UTC
OMG, FIRST!!! :)

So. You know I love this. Really, you do. Otherwise I wouldn't have threatened to stop writing my story. Because I love this. :)

OH NOZ! SELENALENALENA'S PHONE! (I just want to note right now that my computer no longer recognizes "Selenalenalena" as a misspelling. Wicked awesome). Thank's for adding that all in there :) You really put in a lot more emotion since I read it last!

Also, LOL @ the Disney warning. It made me laugh!

Great job, love! Can't wait to read more!! :)

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kittyspotneko September 3 2009, 00:09:07 UTC
oh this makes me wanna cry i feel so bad for both of them. i hate disney right now lol. more please??

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spashley20 September 3 2009, 05:19:52 UTC
love it! great angst. poor demi :(

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sleepy_writer08 September 3 2009, 06:50:24 UTC
This is just getting better and better. I am SO excited to see what's going to happen.

I like how we're getting both sides of the story and we don't have to be disappointed in the other character because I'll admit, I was disappointed in Lena until I read that her phone died and she left her laptop and all that jazz.

I'm really anxious for the next part! Can't wait for more!

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tashamiller2k September 3 2009, 08:05:07 UTC
I love that Selena is so determined to make it back to Demi!
Hopefully she can at least escape long enough to call Demi, poor girls. Bad mean Disney :(

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