{ FIC } One Shot: The only platform in the valley

Nov 10, 2009 16:34

Title: The only platform in the valley

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completed fic, one shot, fan fiction

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rim1789 November 10 2009, 06:47:03 UTC
Yeeeeeeeeeeah! I'm first ^^ First of all that was a great one shot, I enjyed everyhting in it! every single word, evey single moment. That was also really sweet and well written^^I love how Jin took action{ yeah well, knwing Kazuya he better takes the matter in his won hands) the fact that he loved him before. I loved every pov but Jin might be the one I prefer only because he is seeing how cute Kazuya is acting xD...Kazuya is so cute, blushing and acting like that. Endearing^^...And the jobs you gave them, I think it also suits their personnality here^^

It doesnn't happen often, but this time when I finished reading your OS, I felt...Happy and accomlished :D I love the end^^

Thank you so much for the OS, I can only ask you for another one or a fic multichaptered ^^

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falling_petal01 November 11 2009, 01:06:19 UTC
Thank you for reading this one shot ^^
I'm very glad that you enjoyed it so much, very happy that you felt accomplished at the end ^^
I'm still trying to complete my multichaptered fic at the moment. You are welcome to drop by and read it if you want to ^^

Thank you for your encouraging comments. Hope to see you around again <3 (^_^)/

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yumiko_okahawa November 10 2009, 06:55:43 UTC
This was a lovely read in the morning <3 Thanks so much for sharing, I really, really liked it.
I don't often read Akame, but I am happy I read this :)
You pictured them very well, and I liked how they were watching each other for so long. That was really cute!

Thank you *snuggles*

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falling_petal01 November 11 2009, 01:08:05 UTC
Shai-chan!!!! *Hugs*
You actually read one of my fic!!! XD
*Happy dance and snuggle back*

Thank you for commenting darling <3

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akameonly November 10 2009, 07:20:36 UTC
I love Joe hisaishi....love his work...

This was the epitome of a smalltown somehow gentle noir feeling that lingers for quite a long time in the readers mind...
the cold weather is somehow comforting..accompanied by the warmth of coffee and alongside it..a book to top it all off..everything screams of a painfully smooth calming and gentle akame....
This was amazing...

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falling_petal01 November 11 2009, 01:10:15 UTC
Ahhh I'm so glad that there's someone else that enjoys Joe Hisaishi's work too ^^
Thank you for your beautiful words that you used in this comment to sum up the story. Very touched *Hugs*
Thank you for reading.

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puffie_hanchan November 10 2009, 07:26:21 UTC
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD <---- This is how I looked like after I finished reading this. I really love the story *sighs dreamily*

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falling_petal01 November 11 2009, 01:12:08 UTC
Thank you for reading my fic ^^
I can definitely imagine your expression. Thank you for reading and commenting XD

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falling_petal01 November 11 2009, 01:12:59 UTC
Thank you for reading and I'm glad that you enjoyed the song too <3

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