The First Stain on the Snow White Soul

[fallenxembers17]

ahaha spamming up flists FTW.

Title: The First Stain on the Snow White Soul
Author:  fallenxembers17
Characters: Young variations of: England, France, America, Russia, China.
Word Count: 175~250 each, total of about 1,100.
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, gore, non-explicit rape, unsavory ideals & histories. Un-beta'd.
Summary: 5 drabbles detailing the first kills of the

Comments

[mlmaos]

Drabbles’ topic is quite difficult, but, in my opinion, you managed do it excellent.

I liked the way you describe this event of Russia. Indeed, Russia was able to free him selves from the power of the Golden Horde, not so much by battles and uprisings, as with expectance and cunning skilful policy.

[fallenxembers17]

Thank you so much!

To be honest, Russia's was the most difficult. Not only the historical aspect - hey, somebody noticed that part! - but also because he has such a defined character by WWII that it was difficult to scale back the insanity enough to fit the situation and time period.

Again, thank you~!

[ishime]

(Hm, hi, came here through the hetalia com.)

Those drabbles are really good. Especially Russia and America's. I loved them, and I'm frustrated that my English isn't good enough to find a better way of expressing it.

Just one question about Gaul, though. Where did you find your data about it ? Because I'm french and I've been taught and read in novels that Gaul was a roman word and concept, and that the inhabitants of Gaul didn't call themselves Gauls before the conquest. They thought of themselves as Celts, and they weren't united : there were different peoples, each with its own king, etc.
(Er, sorry if I'm bothering you. This is quite off topic I guess, but Hetalia rouse my curiousity about those things.)

[fallenxembers17]

Thank you~! Even that's praise enough for me. ^^

EEK. I knew that info was probably off. To be honest, most of that is scraped together from what I remember from my French class a couple years ago, and I'm not surprised if the facts were off/Americanized. I should've done more research - thank you for letting me know! Don't worry, you're not bothering me at all. I love learning about history, even if it means I was wrong.

I feel so stupid now. OTL That drabble might be getting some editing soon.

[fallenxembers17]

*blushes and basks in sudden undeserved praise*

Thank you so much! ♥

[pagaille]

This was so so so so great, oh my god.
AND EEEEEEE. You actually referred to England as Albion! :'D
I rarely see that in fics when they're about that time period, and that surprises me quite a bit.

[fallenxembers17]

Thank you very much! ♥

I actually think I was wrong to refer to him as Albion. And apparently 'Gaul' is incorrect as well. *sigh*

INORITE?! There's, like, none. So I had to write some~

Holy shit your icon scares me. o_____o He'd so do it, too...

[pagaille]

I think you were right.~ D:
Actually, I'm watching this show on the History Channel right now and they're talking about Rome and Gaul.
WEEEEIRD.

Oh, yes he would. Denmark better watch his back.~

[droopingwillow]

It's unusual to see China fics set in the very beginnings lol XD

Would like to see more. The Xia dynasty is quite controversial you know.

[fallenxembers17]

I know it is, to both. What can I say, I'm a controversial, contrary person! =]