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Switchblade Instruction: NL/TN

Apr 15, 2006 22:06

Title: Switchblade Instructions.

Author: FallenShateiel

Rating: NC17

Pairing: Neville Longbottom/ Theodore Nott

Warning:

Summary: Nott is sick of Longbottom and his bloody happy go team.

( Switchblade Instructions )

theodore nott, theodore/neville, neville longbottom, nc17, slash, oneshot, fics

Comments 5

alisanne April 15 2006, 22:40:24 UTC

Hmm. I liked insane Nott, and I can see Neville having a core of steel, but he does all but rape Nott, which is a bit OOC, IMO. I liked the story overall, though... *laughs* Not sure that helped at all.

fallenshateiel April 15 2006, 22:47:01 UTC

originally this was suppose to be a fic where neville just kicks the ass out of theodore but then i decided to see how a neville/theodore would work out.
Did not intend to make Neville rape Nott.
but that's what happened. Even I'm confused.

alisanne April 15 2006, 22:59:56 UTC

LOL. Don't you hate it when stories have a mind of their own? I generally don't like non-con, so it's unsual for me to like a rape fic, but given Nott's obvious insanity and antisocial personality traits, the fact that it's disjointed and choppy, it made sense to me, and I found myself wondering if Neville actually did that or if Nott imagined it all. The bottom line is that it made me think, and that's generally a good thing.

cheeky_weasley April 16 2006, 16:06:08 UTC

Well that was different. That's for sure. Interesting, you could say. I didn't mind it. Neville is one of my favourite characters (see my layout LOL), he definitely would not do this but...yet...I didn't mind it.

Sorry I'm not being more helpful but I'm not exactly a fiction connoisseur and I can't stop picturing a fit hardcore Neville...

fallenshateiel April 16 2006, 17:10:52 UTC

Thank you for the comment. Neville is one of my favourite character's and I don't really write him. I think (I don't really know) that I was trying to make him into a more 'Made of Steel' type man that it goes on about in the DA.
I don't think I managed it. (My secret is that I want to be able to write fluffly Neville but I'm an angst writer so I've tended in the past to make him both smarter and 'Slytherin' than he actually is)
BUT thank you. My Quest to make an in character Neville goes on!