"Pure Intentions" - Paire one-shot

[fallenmagic]

Fandom: Heroes
Title: Pure Intentions
Characters: Peter, Claire, Samuel
Word Count: 1,014
Rating: PG-13 for incest
Spoilers/Warnings: Slight spoiler/spec for the rest of S4. Incest!
Disclaimer: I don't own Heroes.
Summary: She's better away from you, just like everyone is better away from you.
A.N: Written for pairechallenge . Written to "Amie" by Damien Rice

Comments

[tnbella]

I loved this. Great job capturing the character voices! It needs to be Jan. 4th already. lol

[fallenmagic]

Thank you! :D And yes, it really does hehe

[maggiemalfoy]

I've been in need of a new Paire fic, and this was soo nice!
Great job on the dialogue. Very realistic.

[fallenmagic]

Thanks very much :D

[rosellemarie143]

loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[fallenmagic]

Heee thank you, Rosie! :D

[commen_sense]

oooohhh i loved this. you do second person pov so well and i just love your characterization.

Samuel merely grinned toothily, “Neither of us standing here has pure intentions for Miss Bennet, Petrelli, but at least I admit to that.”

oh god that is exactly what I would imagine samuel saying. that dialouge was spot on.

i loved peter leaving files knowing claire would figure it out, claire calling him immediately for help, A part of you always knew she’d end up in your arms ... gorgeous.

so glad to see some paire fic from you again :)

[fallenmagic]

Thanks so much hun <3

Hee, I love writing Samuel, from the very little I've written of him. I can't wait to have the time to write the Samuel/Claire plotbunnies that are in my head.

On another note, just so you know, we're going to be needing Nathan in solemn_hours soonish, but obviously as it's Xmas week everyone is all over the place XD

[realynn8]

Oh, this was really good. Wonderful work and so well written. :)

[fallenmagic]

Thanks very much! ^_^