Comments | fallenmagic: "Under the Same Stars" Paire challenge #13 'Break'

fallenmagic

"Under the Same Stars" Paire challenge #13 'Break'

Oct 10, 2009 14:50

Title: Under the Same Stars
Characters/Pairings: Peter & Claire. Mentions of other characters.
Rating: PG-13 for swear words and references to incest.
Word Count: 619 (604 without lyrics)
Spoilers/Warnings: References to incest, spoilers right up to the end of 4x04 'Acceptance'
Disclaimer: I don't own Heroes. Lyrics belong to Fink.
Summary: They're ( Read more... )

fic, challenge, paire, pg-13

Comments 10

commen_sense October 10 2009, 14:30:52 UTC

oh gosh this was gorgeous. so heartbreaking and angsty and so very paire-ish!

and claire thinking of going to new york and getting into an accident in hopes of peter coming to save her is soooo canon i swear :P i have MORE plotbunnies now :D

fallenmagic October 10 2009, 19:01:30 UTC

Thank you! :)

Yes! I got plot bunnies writing that line xD Feel free to write it though, I don't think I'll have time to do anything now until my personal statement's finished :/

wuhdemah October 10 2009, 18:55:06 UTC

You never cease to amaze me, Ellie. Seriously, this was the most beautiful piece. Just... gah. <3 I love your fics.

I especially liked this part:
she’s been debating whether or not to travel to New York and get into an accident, just so he might be the one to save her again.

Just... they sound so broken, and it's beautiful. Great, great work, Ellie. Good luck. <3

fallenmagic October 10 2009, 19:25:14 UTC

Seriously? Geez hun I don't know quite what to say to any of this xD But thank you, it means a lot <3

paynesgrey October 11 2009, 13:17:36 UTC

Aww, this was very sad, but you definitely picked up on an underlying mood of Season 4. Great work.

fallenmagic October 12 2009, 18:40:49 UTC

Thanks hun! :)

badass_lullaby October 11 2009, 13:25:50 UTC

you just made me speechless. You have such a talent.. always leaving this weird feeling in my guts.. (not like vomiting XD" I mean such an.. undescribable 'Wow'.. I can't find the right words.. well done <'3)

fallenmagic October 12 2009, 18:48:29 UTC

Oh, thanks so much! :) And I'm glad it's not a vomiting feeling xD

bellonablack October 12 2009, 03:54:49 UTC

I love the imagery in this one. <3 Total win on that.

He's a hero but he's losing so much here. Who he really is, and what a hero is. It's sad but good! :-)

fallenmagic October 12 2009, 18:49:50 UTC

Thank you! And yeah :( I got that when I was watching the show, and as much as I hate it, it makes for good fic xD