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fallenmagic

The Man Out Of Time (4/13) - Part 2

May 26, 2009 17:30

Fandom: Heroes
Title: The Man Out Of Time
Rating: Up to PG-13. This chapter: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Platonic and romantic Paire. Ensemble.
Warnings/Spoilers: Set in an AU S1 timeline. Possible references to the future episodes from S3. No spoilers for S4. And Paire are not related in this one, folks!
Disclaimer: I don't own Heroes. And every ( Read more... )

fic, the man out of time, paire, pg-13, ttw

Comments 10

wuhdemah May 26 2009, 16:52:57 UTC

Silly LJ and its being a bitch. ¬_¬

Anyway, YES to both parts of this chapter! <33 You know, I continue to be amazed at how many similarities there are between TTW and some stuff from Heroes, and then when adding Paire in... yeesh! Just kinda overflows with comparisons and such. I love it. <3

And I find it hilarious that in the second chapter (I think o.o) Peter swore he wasn't going to be jumping off any buildings to Nathan. XD Oh, gosh. Hee.

Great chapter, as per usual, Ellie! :D I always have a blast reading this.

fallenmagic May 27 2009, 18:39:18 UTC

Heh, yes. It was throwing a little hissy-fit yesterday, wasn't it? ¬_¬

Thank you! Yeah, the more I re-read it, the more I find similarities between the two :)

Yes, he did, but we all know what Peter's like ;) He's doing it to prove a point xD

paynesgrey May 26 2009, 16:58:52 UTC

Oooh, fantastic! It's so good and enthralling, and YAY, present!Peter has met Hiro and he gets his time traveling powers. I love this spin to the show. Great job.

fallenmagic May 27 2009, 18:44:55 UTC

Thank you! :D Yes, now the story can really get going :) ( And get more confusing, for me at least xD )

cocochanel60 May 26 2009, 20:24:07 UTC

The more I read this fic, the more I love it!! :D
This is just amazing, it's so well written.

The part with Claire explaining to Peter what happened with Brody was great, or when he comes back to his Claire and she says "Thank you!"

There are many Peters and Claires (at different moments of their life) but we are not confused because it's well written ... we understand everything! :D

Thanks again Ellie! *hug*

fallenmagic May 27 2009, 18:46:02 UTC

Yay! Thank you, Coco :)

I'm glad you liked that bit, it was my favourite bit to write because...well if you read the book, you'll see why ;)

I'm glad you're not confused about the timeline, 'cause I've been a little getting it all figured out, lol.

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fallenmagic May 27 2009, 18:46:58 UTC

Thank you! ^_^

Wow! alex_conrad June 13 2009, 02:23:46 UTC

Okay, so my friend told me about this story and sent me the first chapter. I freaking fell in love. I have read all of it in ten minutes. This is amazing, i just started the Time Travelers Wife and so this is really cool to read along with it. Thanks so much for coming up with this, your a genius, i look forward to reading more, I LOVE IT!!! Thanks alot!

Re: Wow! fallenmagic June 15 2009, 13:06:11 UTC

Hee, wow, 10 minutes? Ooh, I hope you enjoy the book, it's such an amazing read :)

Thanks, I hope to update soonish :D