It's karaokegal's birthday!

Oct 23, 2007 16:46

Title: Perverse
Rating: Mature [non-graphic sex and language]
Pairing: Wilson/OMC, Wilson/House
Word Count: ~1500
Summary: Wilson doesn't deal well with comfortable stasis.
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine, and no profit is being made form their usage here.
Author Notes: Happy Whatever-th B-day, karaokegal!

Happy birthday to you ... happy birthday to you ... )

fic:[house]

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backtograce October 24 2007, 06:45:23 UTC
*jaw drops*
. . .

*wipes drool*

Okay, I think I might be able to form a sentence now.
Where to start, though?

I've always pictured Wilson as sub. Definitely fits him all too well in this piece. I love how you didn't go into serious detail with the sex scenes. Very nice, not smutty at all.
And I love how House picked up on things, like always. And how he did get jealous, in a very House way.
And I love, love, love the last bit. ZOMG. Amazing.

Good work! I wish someone would write me beautiful, amazing, House/Wilson fanfiction for my birthday. Or other special occasions, since my b-day's long gone now.

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fallen_arazil October 25 2007, 00:12:20 UTC
I wish someone would write me beautiful, amazing, House/Wilson fanfiction for my birthday.

If they don't, clearly you don't have the right friends! ^_^

Yeah, the focus of this fic wasn't the sex, so I didn't put in the smut. (also, I didn't feel like it. ^_^ For me, writing sex scenes takes a lot of effort.)

Hah, everyone loves the last bit, but honestly, I just sort of threw in the kiss at the last minute. The plan was t have House want to be what Wilson needed but find himself unable to--except, I ended up hitting my deadline and ending earlier, and I wanted to show that House did want Wilson so ... yeah, the kiss.

Thanks for the comment!

~Djinn

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backtograce October 25 2007, 00:17:21 UTC
Obviously I don't have the right friends. *sadface*

And actually, it wasn't the kiss that I loved so much. It was just the idea of House being that dom and saying that to Wilson.
I'm into the whole dom thing, though, so I guess that helps...

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alemyrddin October 24 2007, 08:02:52 UTC
mmm... I can see Wilson needing something like that. it's very in character for him.
And it was hot.
But I think House could give him what he needs too, and maybe now he'll start doing it. (yes, I want them to be happy together, even if I know it's hard)
:)

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daisylily October 24 2007, 09:39:26 UTC
"House, I swear to God, if my paperwork is sticky--"

HAHAHAHA! Wonderful!

I enjoyed this a lot - it worked beautifully. And the ending is just plain hot (are you sure you don't want to write a sequel?)

*mems*

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bridgididge October 24 2007, 09:45:22 UTC
Man, there was this universe in which everyone's sexual orientation was based on Dom and Sub, and I remember thinking "God, Wilson IS a sub."

And it works so well, and it's so screwed up that I love it. I like the contrast between this kind of on the edge brutality, and weird domesticity he has with House. I'm not sure are they supposed to be House/Wilson established? I thought it was just set in season 2, but I might be having a brain freeze.

Loved it

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eryslash October 24 2007, 10:52:55 UTC
Oh my god, this is so hot and wrong and...HOT. AND WRONG.
But I absolutely love it, and I'm not ashamed *g*

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