A talk about boys - ToraxSaga - OS

[fallen_am_i]

Title: A talk about boys
Chapters: Oneshot
Author: fallen_am_i 
Genre: AU, slight romance, slice of life
Warnings: BL
Rating: PG
Pairing: Tora x Saga
Synopsis: "Every break I would meet him there, share my lunch, though it was more like he was stealing my lunch… And we would watch down to the yard, as usual. Groups of girls gossiping, lovely geeks playing with their

Comments

[myrto_23]

Really cute! I like that a girl is the narrator it gives a different feeling... :)

[fallen_am_i]

Thank you for your words :)))

I really wanted to write from the point of view of a girl, and well, that is also the way I would like to react in something like this... xD It was a short break, since I am too lazy to sit down and type Dx and This is my first work that is done imediately on pc...

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

[luvthe_gazette]

Είναι πολύ ωραίο Ο.Ο Μ'αρέσει που το αφηγήται ένα τρίτο πρόσωπο, του δίνει ένα διαφορετικό αλλά ευχάριστο στυλ :D

[fallen_am_i]

Ήθελα να το περιγράψω από την οπτική γωνία ενός τρίτου προσώπου που να έχει όμως τις δικές μου απόψεις πάνω στο θέμα... Αφορμή ήταν μια εκνευριστική συζήτηση που είχα με κάτι γνωστούς DX

Ευχαριστώ πολύ, ελπίζω σύντομα να κάτσω να γράψω κ το κεφάλαιο από το κακόμοιρο το multichapter, γιατί με την εξεταστική τα πράγματα είναι ζόρικα... Αλλά κάτι θα κάνω :)

[luvthe_gazette]

Εξεταστική; Είσαι στο πανεπιστήμιο;! Καλό κουράγιο.

[fallen_am_i]

Είμαι που να μην ήμουνα! :P Να' σαι καλά! Μακάρι να πάει καλά αυτή η εξεταστική μπας και ησυχάσω!

[witch_chameleon]

It was really cute. Although I do not like when a female character, in this case, I felt it more than necessary for the meeting between them was in commemoration of meets? Really cute! :) I liked was tender and somewhat magical. Although I left wanting to know what else could happen, like me :)

[fallen_am_i]

I like female characters when writers use them well... I have no idea if i did that right, but at least i was satisfied with my result :) I was thinking about that too, imagining a continue in this story, how everything went and all... xD

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

[shinnyluvssuju]

"And that was the moment when their eyes locked for the first time, at least when I was around. There was not embarrassment, nor fear. It was something I cannot explain, even if I use every word from every dictionary, but I can say that it was a beautiful feeling. The feeling of something locking between them, the one you have when you meet someone and you just know that they’ll play a huge part in your life. That’s what happened right then, as their lips grew into small smiles, as Takashi shoved the notebook close to him and Tora brought a chair to sit with us."

Omo, this line made me so happy <3333 this is adorable. I love highschool!Tora. I can imagine him in an adorable little uniform :3

[fallen_am_i]

Oh yes!!! xD I wanted so much to write abotu highschool Tora 8D And this idea was stuck in my mind...

Thank you for your kind words and for reading my story :)

[saga_92]

I know it!
You're good at this! Lol I really love this story... It's total sweet :D
XD I feel like I'm watching a movie xD thank you for the great story :D

[fallen_am_i]

And thank you for the great comment :D
Truth is I had missed the fluffy side a little... I needed a break from the heavy atmosphere and this one was my chance to do it! :3

Thank you for your words :) Soon enough there will be an update on BITD, I'll start working on my typing xD