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He is Risen (Interlude)

Jul 29, 2007 18:45

He is Risen

Author: Falafel
Title: He is Risen
Synopsis: Three part fic. A month after Charlie's death, Desmond and Locke revisit the Looking Glass station and make a chilling discovery.
Characters: Desmond, Charlie, Locke, Claire and B-Team.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost.
Warnings: Dark themes and scary moments.
Link: Chapter One ( Read more... )

angst, supernatural, charlielives!, chesmond, pb&j

Comments 22

babydazzle July 30 2007, 01:28:22 UTC

falafel_fiction July 30 2007, 08:14:05 UTC

Oooh! I'm glad you liked that bit. I think Charlie has always wanted his own innocence back. That is why he is so drawn to Claire and Aaron.

babydazzle July 30 2007, 17:05:11 UTC

falafel_fiction August 1 2007, 18:21:10 UTC

I think (minus drugs) Charlie has always been one of the sweeter and more innocent characters of Lost, along with Hurley and Claire. As of NOW I would say Charlie is more good than the other two. Hurley and Claire are often passively good, while Charlie is actively good.

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meagan4dominic July 30 2007, 07:16:33 UTC

I've been waiting for you to continue this & this chapter was so good. I loved Hurley in it & Charlie & Claire's love at first sight was so good but now I can't wait for this huge ending

falafel_fiction July 30 2007, 08:16:20 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! Please hang on for the end...I'm afraid it may take a while.

meagan4dominic July 30 2007, 08:19:56 UTC

I will most definitely hang on for the end, I wouldn't miss it for anything!

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falafel_fiction August 1 2007, 18:23:23 UTC

Hehe! Don't worry, I'm the same. I adore PB&J, but I have to admit I'm a bigger fan of Churley and Chesmond.

Go B-Team! Those guys are the best.

sapphire_child July 31 2007, 05:04:34 UTC

Holy crap.

Now he was yawning and leaning into Desmond’s shoulder. In a weary voice Charlie thanked the Scotsman for saving his life. Desmond raised an eyebrow. It seemed that Charlie at least remembered him and perhaps the nature of their relationship. - this is. the cutest. image. ever. omg. XD

I love Hurley's reaction to Desmond being in his tent. You write him so well. My favourite bit was this one...

“Well, can you at least promise to keep your voice down?”
“DUUUUDDDEEE…”
“Hurley for Godsake! I just asked you to be quiet. You’re gonna wake up the whole camp. Get a grip, man!” XD

“Dude, what’s wrong with him? Is he like brain damaged or something? Can he even talk?!”
“Yeah, I can talk!” - bwa! even when he has no idea who Hurley is, Charlie can still banter with him!

Sayid opened and closed his mouth a few times. This appeared to be one of those rare occasions when he was completely stumped.
At this point, Sayid stopped trying to make sense of the situation and simply began to laugh. - LOVE ( ... )

falafel_fiction August 1 2007, 19:52:08 UTC

Yay! It's a lovely loooong sapph review. *grins dementedly* Your feedback is always a treat.

I think "adorable" is a key theme in this chapter (don't cha just love sleepy Charlie?) I needed a relief from the angst of Ch1&2 and the angst/action that is now coming up in the finale. I just love writing for the B-Team boys - Sayid, Hurley, Jin...agh! Love em!

The last bit with Des and Locke sets you up for the last part. There is gonna be a battle of wills between them. Jacob still wants Aaron...and he may still be able to possess Charlie! Hold onto your seat.

sapphire_child August 3 2007, 01:19:14 UTC

It was a great part to read! Of course you get detailed feedback! *grins back*

Sleepy Charlie is teh adorableness.

Ooooh, way to get me all psyched for the last bit now! *bounces*

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falafel_fiction August 18 2007, 16:37:51 UTC

Thanks angel. Jin is fun to write. I've got a newer darker final chapter up now...