The Hardest Word

[falafel_fiction]

The Hardest Word

Name: Falafel
Title: The Hardest Word
Summary: After the parachutist has been saved, Desmond struggles to patch things up with Charlie. This story begins immediately after the events of D.O.C. Desmond narrates.
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost. 
Rating: PG-13 
Characters: Desmond, Charlie, Hurley and Jin.
Word Count: 1498
Warnings: None.

Comments

[babydazzle]

[falafel_fiction]

Thanks baby! It took me a while to find Desmonds voice but now I've got it, Des is so much fun to narrate with.

[babydazzle]

[cylune9]

Come on, brother. Will you let me save your life again?

LOL!!! That was great!! Des description of Charlie was so spot on! I love how you described his gestures.

His lips are pursed and his tongue is pressing against the inside of his cheek
He does that quite often, isn't it! Great observations!

Great job! I loved it!

(Now get working on ToF!!!! PLEASE!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!)

[falafel_fiction]

Glad you enjoyed it! I think Dom has been doing the tongue thing a lot since S3. I wonder if it's because he had all that dental work done. Anyway it has become a very cute little Charlie trait.

[falafel_fiction]

Thanks pace. I have to say Charlie&Des is challenging Charlie&Hurley as my OTP. They are so great together (but then Charlie&Hurley have the history so...)

[sapphire_child]

Love the interaction between these two in this - Desmond is completely spot on with Charlie's stubborness but I love how in the end he still managed to make him laugh.

Thanks for another great fic falafal!

[falafel_fiction]

Thanks sapph! I was really struggling to make the laughter feel genuine at the end there.