The Belly of a Whale

[falafel_fiction]

The Belly of a Whale

Summary: Bonnie choses not to tell Ben about Charlie's intrusion of the Looking Glass station. Over the following weeks Bonnie and Greta hold him prisoner and Charlie is slowly drawn into their intense relationship. 
Rating: NC-17 (for violence, sex and strong language).
Warnings: Includes het, femmeslash, threeways, mild bondage

Comments

[falafel_fiction]

Cheers for betaing, pacey! I thought your quote would put my Gen readers at ease, letting them know that this isn't just PWP - there is an angsty lil storyline too.

I think Charlies driveshaft/drugs period shows you that (while he is good at heart) he is quite easily seduced and corrupted. I do enjoy a bit of debauched!Charlie.

Well, Darlton just had to have their finale bloodbath. What a waste of so many good characters! Not only Charlie but Greta, Bonnie and Naomi...some powerful females that the show seriously needs.

[falafel_fiction]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it, toes! I think I was rather inspired by your own slash fics because they always come with powerful storylines and beautiful descriptive prose. I might have to dabble in slash again. My one regret with this fic is that I couldn't find a good story reason for Charlie, Sayid and Desmond having their own threeway at the end there (maybe next time...)

It was cool exploring Charlie's sexuality, especially with the threesome angle that seems to crop up in so many Charlie FBs. Seems Charlie WILL be shared like a common curry!

[falafel_fiction]

Hehe! Okay, lets say Desmond finds the girls liquor stash and suggests a boys sleepover in the LG. After Sayid and Des have given Charlie a little h/c, they all get drunk, one thing leads to another and...and theres your happy ending of sorts!

I'd like to try m/m slash sometime (to challenge myself). Dunno what pairing to go for though. Should I slash up my dear Chesmond?! *gulps* Not sure I could go through with that. I read an Eko/Charlie spanking fic recently. Now there's a pairing with real kink potiential (I say if you're gonna do slash you might as well make it as smutty and warped as can be!)

[spikessweetgirl]

aww, poor Charlie! *Hugs him*

[falafel_fiction]

Thanks spikes!

[nicky_phoicsxy]

i really enjoyed this fic!

[falafel_fiction]

Thanks! And welcome new reader...

[cylune9]

That's quite different than PWP, now isn't it? I was curious (and afraid, to be honest) of where you where going to go with this but I was pleasantly surprised! I love physiological torture stories... doesn't get much better than this. Great job again!

[falafel_fiction]

Thanks Lune! I asked pace what warnings I'd need and when I wrote them all down I was like 'wow!' - this fic does sound scary! But yeah, the psychological story is what I liked best too and the sex made it more messed up.