Sinner (1/?) [edited 4/27/11]

[fakemoon]

Title: Sinner

Fandom: Big Bang

Pairing/characters: GTOP, Jiyong, Seunghyun, Youngbae, Seungri, Daesung, Dongwook

Warnings: Violence, Crude language, Crude humor, Slash, Insanity, Genre: police

Summary: No one was really sure about Seunghyun. Especially not himself.

Author's Note: A little earlier than I wanted to post it. But I was getting

Comments

[usoshigo]

This sounds promising!
*waiting eagerly for next chapter*
♥

[fakemoon]

Thanks for reading!

[kutunakal]

And who... exactly live on the 9th floor?
Ooooh, I can't wait for the next chapter.. Update, update.... ^___^

[fakemoon]

That's for you to find out! Thanks for reading and commenting!

[ayame_ikatsu]

Can't wait to read more, it seems really interesting. ♥
It's well written, too, something I miss in the BB fandom. :)
Can I add you, so I won't lose this fic?

[fakemoon]

Of course! I don't see why I should stop you! I would love it if you add me.

And thanks for reading and thinking so! This makes me feel so special!

[ayame_ikatsu]

Added you~♪

You're welcome! It's such a disappointment every time I see promising fics, to not to be able to finish reading a paragraph because it's choppy or just badly written in general. So I'm really glad I found this :3

Also, you should post longer chapters! I was just getting into the story when you cut it off. Of course, I get that it's a slight cliffhanger, but you can extend it and still have a cliffhanger somewhere.
Just a suggestion though, you can ignore me, haha ^^

[fakemoon]

I feel the same way. I look at some fics and I feel really sad when I don't read through them all. I find all the writers that I like and target them. Stalking them, almost.

Originally it was supposed to be a long one shot, but I got tired of writing. Then it was going to be a prologue, but I personally don't like reading prologues, so I didn't make it so. Instead, it's just a really short chapter. This chapter was 800 something words, they're usually 2k+ words, so you don't have to worry about longer chapters. The progressively get longer.

[irm_cik]

can't wait for the next one :))

[fakemoon]

I' glad I can impress you! And don't worry, more will be out soon! Thanks for reading and commenting!