Hallelujah (할렐루야) - A One Shot

Dec 01, 2010 16:06

Title: Hallelujah (할렐루야)

Fandom: Big Bang

Pairing/characters: GTOP(Slightly), Jiyong, Seunghyun, Youngbae, Seungri

Warnings: Violence, Crude language, Crude humor

Summary: ((Based heavily on this. )) Two gangs are going to war with each other, and it's Youngbae's job to find out why.

Author's Note: Completely different from my other writing ( Read more... )

character: youngbae, genre: gangs, title: hallelujah, character: seungri, status: complete, genre: police, character: jiyong, pairing: gtop, character: seunghyun, genre: fluff

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erikaoi December 1 2010, 22:30:54 UTC
Too bad its one chapter.I would like to know what happen after they got escaped from killing all the top’s.I like ji and seunghyun character.so fit together.gngdpmwtj so great!

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fakemoon December 2 2010, 03:24:47 UTC
Ah, my ever loyal fan. I see you have returned! It's supposed to be mysterious! Kinda how the video left off. But, yeah, maybe one day I'll write a continuing piece. Doesn't sound too bad. This piece practically wrote itself, so maybe it will happen again?

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment! I love you for this!

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erikaoi December 2 2010, 04:57:34 UTC
Aw its nothing.If I like one’s writer then I will remember it,since I like your writing so I will read+comment.u write my fave gtop.ow hope you can make sequel of this,if not write new gtop.hehe

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masquedtears December 2 2010, 01:25:48 UTC
Haha, loved the last line.
Their idea to kill everyone who knew too much and stop being gangsters is so cute.
.. Well, except for the fact that they're killing a whole lot of people.

Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that you're story is all kinds of awesome. Really enjoyed it. (:
Looking forward to your next story.

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fakemoon December 2 2010, 03:31:25 UTC
I was going to go for a cheesy "Rest in Peace", but then I realized that it really is cheesy. A little change never hurt. And the killing thing? Normal for them. Especially in my stories.

Thanks for reading and leaving feedback! I love people that do this!

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fakemoon December 2 2010, 04:24:06 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad I can change someone's perspective on the performance!

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fakemoon December 2 2010, 04:25:55 UTC
I'm so glad I could make you comment! That in itself is an accomplishment for me!

I HAD to do something when I saw the video. Especially since my forte with writing is to write about violence with guns. It's my thing. And, of course, I would love it if you read some of my other stuff! Go on ahead~! I'm definitely not stopping you!

Thanks so much for reading!

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jiyonglikesme December 2 2010, 06:52:51 UTC
Jeez you always brilliantly made GTOP as the best pairing ever! didn't expect the flow of the fic would be like that,you're made an amazing one-shot dear~~i think i need to ask people to give me their thumbs since 2 thumbs are not enough for you, trust me!
well done, love it!! ^o^

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fakemoon December 2 2010, 09:38:55 UTC
I like your cheesiness and how you made it even cheesier there. Thanks, anyway. I'm glad you liked it, though it was different from how I usually write. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment!

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